|Reviews for Late Night Revelations|
| Cutter12 chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Surprised that Alan reacted so calmly when he found out that Charlie had been in danger. Though seeing Don having nightmares tempered his response. Thanks for the story.
| zookitty chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
aw wow that was a perfect story. I love it. Hair ruffling and all. So well in character
| ferryboat George chapter 1 . 6/15/2007
| SaJi chapter 1 . 9/29/2006
A nice tag on for "Sniper Zero", I really enjoyed reading it.
| A Thing For Brothers chapter 1 . 8/29/2006
Great story! I really liked it! I think I read it before, but now I've seen that episode and it makes it much better. LOL Great job!
| ML Only chapter 1 . 2/21/2006
I really enjoyed that! Very believable in terms of the show itself. Thank you!
| hotchner chapter 1 . 1/11/2006
This story had a little bit of a twist to it. I really
loved it. It was not like the others that I have read.
I would like to read more like them. You could have
had Charlie down with them also though. The story was
real good though. I would like to read more like it.
| atrum infractus chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
Aww! That would have been the perfect scene missing from Sniper Zero. Some of the ones you see tend to be weepy, and leave off in depression. You manage to keep the entire family in character, and keep the show's appeal through your writing. I could nitpick- and I am.
Somehow, I don't see Don shouting when he woke up. He's a shock-absorbing character, even in his subconscious, I think (this part is completely my oppinion; your view of the character is probably different) that Don would have just been out of breath, perhaps covered in a cold sweat. I don't know. That part was kind of odd for me.
If my memory fails me, I'm sorry, but I don't recall Alan ever learning of Charlie firing a gun. I'm probably wrong, I've only seen it twice...
Anyway, great work.
| A-blackwinged-bird chapter 1 . 11/18/2005
Loved it before, Love it now. Great family fic! Love those warm fuzzy moments!
Thanks for this beautiful story,
| Patty chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
Very good! I can see this happening as an aftermath
of the shooting in the Eppes household. Poor Don, he couldn't keep from dwelling on what might have been.
I'm glad that Alan seemed to take it all in stride.
Maybe the brothers can do so soon.
| themidnightstar chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
Great one-shot! Love the idea that both Alan and Charlie are more perceptive than Don sometimes likes to think. And the part about the mom was really good.
| 3rdgal chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
Great story! You wrote the chracaters perfectly. I love the part about Don and his mother. I had never thought of that before, but I can see it being true.
I like all of your stories, but this one is may favorite. Great job!
| Rinne chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
Great episode tag.
| Ivette Boveda chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
great little tag!
| texas2step chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
I thought this was a great addition to the episode of Sniper Zero. I love these one shot fics and you did a great job. Your conversations between the characters were right from the show. It was an easy image to vision and I truly enjoyed it.