Reviews for Standing on the edge of the world
Peachie-Trishie chapter 2 . 4/28/2008
plz plz plz update son!
lockheart1 chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
hey thats cool n sweet too! Update plz cant wait!
Astaya chapter 1 . 8/7/2007
First of all, Sephiroth is spelled wrong. If it was just the one time I would have overlooked it, but you have it spelled that way every time.

Second, in the game the different "districts" are called sectors.

You also have a few minor spelling mistakes from what I have read so far.

Your characterization seems a bit off.

FYI, you might want to see about a beta to help with this story. The plot doesn't seem bad but spelling a characters name wrong can throw the whole story off for readers like me.
DynastyWARRIORS chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
...your probably not gonna update this i think...


oh well...just saying tis a great storyline u got...

and hope u update
SweetSweetAura chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
seems quite cool.. update! :D
yo wuz up chapter 1 . 7/18/2006
oh can't wait for next chapter update plz oh and Sephieroth is spelt sephiroth
BadassAdorable chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
update it already, GOD!
Love4tomorrow chapter 1 . 11/29/2005
Cool, i like it so far, keep up the good work!
Aftershadows chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
as a experienced fanfic reader, i haffta say,. ur ideas r good. ur chapters need to be longer, and more refined. overall- decent job
Mystic Dragon Eyes chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
Wow, this is interesting, keep it up!
Alatus chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
Cool, cool, cool! I can't wait to see what happens! You must update!
ANBUninja562 chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
great story. but as a long time fanfic reader, i must say that your chapters are too short. try adding in small details and put 2 chapters into one. ur ideas are fantastic, and you should update quickly.
Lady-Rinoa14 chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
this was a great start!Ü

i'm hoping to read more of this...
jocund50 chapter 1 . 11/14/2005
The suspense is killing me! PLZ hurry with the next one!