Reviews for The Silence
GuesssWho chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
Very, very good.
Ivrin21 chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
I liked the overwhelming sense of panic, sadness and fear you placed in the poem. As the poem progressed, I found myself reading faster and faster. Your poem gave me quite the thrill. Excellent job.
Wicked Glinda chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
This is perfect for Clarice...her determination, her strength, and her crushing guilt. It shows how she always feels she can do MORE, do BETTER...even if she gets to the point of blindness. I liked how your spacing and dashes shows how her mind races,her panic, her tiredness, ect.,ect...It's stunning.

Love it madly. MadlyMadlyMadly.
blind.filmmaker chapter 1 . 1/20/2007
An exquisite, poetic piece. It was heavy with love and fear; I could feel both emotions as I read it. Very well done.

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Shawnee chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
Interesting, Youre a good poet. I dont write much poetry myself but this one looks good to me! v
Leafenclaw chapter 1 . 2/17/2006
So sad... It looks like a song right from her heart. You described it very well.

And your spelling is quite better than mine :P

Luna xx
Zydrate Anonymous chapter 1 . 1/9/2006
Priceless