Reviews for Helena's Revenge
Elven Silver Power Ranger chapter 13 . 7/5/2013
This is by far the best! Fan fiction I have read in a long, long, long, long time! You have an awesome writing ability! The only criticism I have for it is that it’s not done! so if you have some spare time please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, update soon! thank you
theamber1 chapter 4 . 5/24/2009
what happened to arya and all the other elves
Edward the spiderqueen chapter 13 . 8/8/2007
have you tried putting those crazy lines as scene breaks? and yeah, there were a couple mistakes, nothing too serious.

awesome new chapter! It's cool we get to see Murtagh and Selena too. pretty sweet.
Bucky Flavored Skittles chapter 12 . 7/5/2007
Good job! Have you heard the song Helena by My Chemical Romance? I love the video because it shows the girl coming back to life. I thought of Helena when she came back to life
Letidus chapter 12 . 11/1/2006
I don't want to reveal anything, but is yasha Arya?
alsdssg chapter 12 . 11/1/2006
This was a really good chapter. I felt sorry for Buck. I know a guy named Buck. I wonder where Selena is. I love the story. Poor Saphira as well.
dandeliondreams chapter 11 . 8/24/2006
Oh, please don't make Shruikan evil...

I hate it when people make him a vicious dragon, a sort of dragon version of Galbatorix.
Coffee Grounds chapter 11 . 8/22/2006
Wow. Poor Saphira. Poor Eragon. Poor Selena. I should stop using the word 'poor' right now, but WHO CARES! Ahh, hey whaddabout the third dragon? Wonder where he is...meh...*French Roast Bean tries to escape from cage, "NO, GET BACK HERE YOU EVIL BEAN!" phft! goes arrow and French Roast bean goes down, YEA!* Sorry, I have a rather evil pet. :D UPDATE SOON! I hope this makes four reviews...:D:P
Coffee Grounds chapter 10 . 8/22/2006
O! WOWE! :D
Coffee Grounds chapter 9 . 8/22/2006
Love it! This story is getting so INTENSE! :D
Coffee Grounds chapter 8 . 8/22/2006
Menoa is a very good mentor, I see. Kinda reminds me of Eragon. :D Hmm, wonder who Helana is going to try to scy? :D
Coffee Grounds chapter 7 . 8/22/2006
These chapters are very detailed. I like it, no matter if they are short, tho. :D
Coffee Grounds chapter 6 . 8/22/2006
Helana doesn't seem too upset that she can't even have kids-*good girl*. I think that would only get in the way later. Enuff of me thinking, still have to r/r other chappies! YEA! :D
Coffee Grounds chapter 5 . 8/22/2006
HAHA! GO HELANA, GO! I think I'm really getting into this story! YEA! Now, for the other chappies! :D
Coffee Grounds chapter 4 . 8/22/2006
O...Revenge is sweet, yes? Muahahaha...I LIKE IT! :D
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