Reviews for The Alternate Ending: Transall Saga
Guest chapter 1 . 8/22/2017
That was really good and I wanted the ending to be exactly like that. The only thing is, is that what happened to Karen? Did she see him go through the blue light? Lol. But otherwise it was great and just what I needed as an ending!
Timothy Edwards chapter 1 . 8/18/2017
This was amazing, if you could you should try and extend it, maybe go as far as Megaan and Mark weddings or if he ever has children.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/25/2017
I like this. I think you should definitely continue on. I'm working on one myself, but starting from the end of the battle.
Shea D chapter 1 . 2/16/2017
FLAMESno but actually, this was really well done. I wish it was longer, but what ever. (I feel like indeed to put more, but thats all I have to say)
Preston chapter 1 . 2/11/2017
I just finished the book and loved it but found the original ending unsatisfying. I would have not wanted to go back to regular timeline earth if I were mark. So glad to have found this alternate ending. I have no clue if you'll ever read this, seeing as it was published a decade ago, but thanks for writing it! As far as I'm concerned this is the actual last chapter of the book.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/16/2016
You wrote this 11 years ago and likely will never see this review, however, I must say that this ending is the perfect way to end this book.. this has been my favorite book since I was a child, but I'm never pleased with the ending. Thank you for this.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/4/2016
Really good
Nice chapter 1 . 9/23/2016
This was a super long time ago... but I appreciated it today. Thank you :)
awesome fanfic chapter 1 . 5/23/2016
best one i ever read. p.s. best book ever right
Misha chapter 1 . 4/25/2016
love it was really good like i was reading from gary paulsen himself
Guest chapter 1 . 2/21/2016
All I can say is thank you!
Rick Dead chapter 1 . 11/8/2015
LMAO. What the fuck is this? This has to be the worst peice of literature I have ever read! ""There's my girl." Mark tease through clenched teeth" What is this a soft-core porno? Please leave the writing to the authors and the internet to the intelligent.
Cesar chapter 1 . 9/29/2015
Hi, i think your alternate ending is great! I read this book about 7 years ago and completely fell in love with it! It is the best book i have ever read to be honest. Its as if I memory of everything that goes on and i will always cherish this book. I wish they would make a great movie about this book. I am in complete aw and will forever remember it! Glad I could see that other feel the same way about this book.
Random Person chapter 1 . 8/24/2015
Good..what i dont understand is how Megaan found Mark. She had never explored that part of Transall. And also Mark had given the claw necklace to Sarbo.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/15/2015
I enjoyed it. You did a really good job!
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