Reviews for The Alternate Ending: Transall Saga
Timothy Edwards chapter 1 . 8/18
This was amazing, if you could you should try and extend it, maybe go as far as Megaan and Mark weddings or if he ever has children.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/25
I like this. I think you should definitely continue on. I'm working on one myself, but starting from the end of the battle.
Shea D chapter 1 . 2/16
FLAMESno but actually, this was really well done. I wish it was longer, but what ever. (I feel like indeed to put more, but thats all I have to say)
Preston chapter 1 . 2/11
I just finished the book and loved it but found the original ending unsatisfying. I would have not wanted to go back to regular timeline earth if I were mark. So glad to have found this alternate ending. I have no clue if you'll ever read this, seeing as it was published a decade ago, but thanks for writing it! As far as I'm concerned this is the actual last chapter of the book.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/16/2016
You wrote this 11 years ago and likely will never see this review, however, I must say that this ending is the perfect way to end this book.. this has been my favorite book since I was a child, but I'm never pleased with the ending. Thank you for this.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/4/2016
Really good
Nice chapter 1 . 9/23/2016
This was a super long time ago... but I appreciated it today. Thank you :)
awesome fanfic chapter 1 . 5/23/2016
best one i ever read. p.s. best book ever right
Misha chapter 1 . 4/25/2016
love it was really good like i was reading from gary paulsen himself
Guest chapter 1 . 2/21/2016
All I can say is thank you!
Rick Dead chapter 1 . 11/8/2015
LMAO. What the fuck is this? This has to be the worst peice of literature I have ever read! ""There's my girl." Mark tease through clenched teeth" What is this a soft-core porno? Please leave the writing to the authors and the internet to the intelligent.
Cesar chapter 1 . 9/29/2015
Hi, i think your alternate ending is great! I read this book about 7 years ago and completely fell in love with it! It is the best book i have ever read to be honest. Its as if I memory of everything that goes on and i will always cherish this book. I wish they would make a great movie about this book. I am in complete aw and will forever remember it! Glad I could see that other feel the same way about this book.
Random Person chapter 1 . 8/24/2015
Good..what i dont understand is how Megaan found Mark. She had never explored that part of Transall. And also Mark had given the claw necklace to Sarbo.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/15/2015
I enjoyed it. You did a really good job!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/29/2015
Really awesome.
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