|Reviews for The Alternate Ending: Transall Saga|
| Nice chapter 1 . 9/23
This was a super long time ago... but I appreciated it today. Thank you :)
| awesome fanfic chapter 1 . 5/23
best one i ever read. p.s. best book ever right
| Misha chapter 1 . 4/25
love it was really good like i was reading from gary paulsen himself
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/21
All I can say is thank you!
| Rick Dead chapter 1 . 11/8/2015
LMAO. What the fuck is this? This has to be the worst peice of literature I have ever read! ""There's my girl." Mark tease through clenched teeth" What is this a soft-core porno? Please leave the writing to the authors and the internet to the intelligent.
| Cesar chapter 1 . 9/29/2015
Hi, i think your alternate ending is great! I read this book about 7 years ago and completely fell in love with it! It is the best book i have ever read to be honest. Its as if I memory of everything that goes on and i will always cherish this book. I wish they would make a great movie about this book. I am in complete aw and will forever remember it! Glad I could see that other feel the same way about this book.
| Random Person chapter 1 . 8/24/2015
Good..what i dont understand is how Megaan found Mark. She had never explored that part of Transall. And also Mark had given the claw necklace to Sarbo.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/15/2015
I enjoyed it. You did a really good job!
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/29/2015
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/26/2015
Thank you for the addition. It was heart warming wish fulfillment, and I truly enjoyed it. But the whole point of the end of the book is that Mark is trying to prevent the post- apocalyptic world from ever existing by preventing the disease that threw the world into chaos. Please continue to write, you are on the right track. Good prose.
| Snake chapter 1 . 1/19/2015
Not bad, although he should have kept the items he was wearing from old earth, seeing as he had his items when he left old earth, and he had the sword when he returned the first time. Also the wounds would be healed, just as the snake bite was healed when he returned to old earth the first time.
Almost 8 years since you wrote this lol, still read your messages?
I would have been 14 when you wrote this. I read that book when I was around 12 I think. Reread it many times though, and your fan fiction came up when I Googled "Transal Saga Movie"
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/2/2015
I absolutely loved this book, and always found the ending to be left wide open (either for a missing chapter like this, or a complete other sequel) so it made me happy to see it tied up. I loved the ending still don't get me wrong, but the fact that this can fit perfectly should back up my opinions on that. To you, a million applause!
| Dan chapter 1 . 10/2/2014
Been forever since I really thought of this book, it wasn't until the news reports of Ebola in the US that my thoughts turned to the memories fo the book. So that noted, your alternate ending was pretty decent.
| Good Critic chapter 1 . 5/7/2014
Amazing ending. Add more detAil at the end though
| joesumguy chapter 1 . 4/30/2014
Great ending. I was expecting some sort of twist like all of his friends were old and dying or his transporting back to the past to cure Ebola had changed the future. Perhaps even that the Tsook did not even exist yet and this was directly after the nuclear meltdown and the red death.
The twist in the fan fiction was overall good and somewhat unexpected, but had a very low shock value. When writing it is always a good thing if you can make your reader think or even say aloud "Holy shit, did that just happen?!". Even to follow up and resolve it with a similar ending like he finds the light again and takes him back to the time that you had here.
It feels a little like you have a bit of a hole in the middle. Otherwise, it was the ending I imagined it would be. Keep writing you can only get better.