|Reviews for Cry of the Wicked|
| hopelina chapter 33 . 5/11/2017
This story is amazing. It's engaging and filled with both humor and emotion. I absolutely love the ending and ow it talks about there always being good in life even though there's bad stuff too. Bravo!
| Evilkitten3 chapter 33 . 5/31/2016
Well, that settles it. I now have an official "FAVORITE STORY EVER" for this fandom.
| Shadow Spirit Dragon-Wolf chapter 33 . 5/9/2016
Okay, so I FINALLY got around to reviewing this story. I've been meaning to for a while now, but never really had the time or the chance to do so. Now that it's on my mind I'm going to do it. The first thing I have to say is that you, my friend, are evil and I won't forgive you for killing of Ryou! How dare you! Still despite the fact you killed off my favourite character in the whole show it was a very good story. Really sad, but really good as well. Pls a bitter-sweet ending just to make everyting just feel so much better. I love how the characters interacted, and just how everything went. It's very interesting and realistic. I think you did a great job at portraying them, and showing off how their relationship with each other evolved over time. Yes I'm aware this story is very old, but I said I was going to review it so I did. It just took me wa while to do so. Especially with computer issues. Still you are also evil for making another one of my characters evil in this story, but that doesn't hold a candle to the fact that you killed my baby *cries in a corner cuddling Ryou plushy*
| Trystin chapter 33 . 2/12/2016
This is the first story I have ever actually finished an it is a pretty good story. I stayed up from 7pm reading til 7am (yes I'm a slow reader lol) thanks for the good read I loved it
| Kristina Angelina chapter 32 . 11/27/2015
Damnnnnn. Gerald though.
And why does no one like Gerald?! I like him! D:
| nepentheosileus chapter 33 . 9/3/2015
This is the best thing ever. I literally just cried. Oh my god.
| NekomataFangirl chapter 33 . 12/3/2014
Ha a baked crucifix! This is both cute and weird...you shouldn't eat a crucifix cause in the end you poop it out. So I have been told; I was too confused to ask why then they'd feed us all 'the flesh of Christ' in church, since it all ends up being pooped out. But then what's wrong with pooping.
If not Kaiba's medical staff, no-one would be alive ever. Everyone praise Kaiba's doctors
But Bakura, not so long ago, was still very angry at the pharaoh for giving the spell to Ryou, ultimately contributing to Ryou's death. Is that out of the picture now? Is Bakura no longer angry?
BLIND EYES? Is Bakura permanently blind in both eyes? Oh no! Is that really permanent?
As always an uplifting ending is toned down with contemplation of one's existence and unsure hopes of the future. This was a nice fic, pleasant and amusing, though of course not reaching the levels of brilliance displayed in later works. I have enjoyed it thoroughly, internally moaning about how short chapters are, and I am happy in the end Bakura and Yami decided to continue as an item. One would think, with all convolution in place, that Yami would never understand, let alone forgive Bakura for Ryou and pretending to be Ryou, and Bakura would not be able to look past the spell mish-mash, AND the fact that Yami kicked the living crap out of him. Marik deserves more butt-kicking, as he is the one who salvaged Malik and brought him back, fully knowing how evil his yami is. The person who suffered here most, without much of a certain resolve is Kaiba. Not every day one like Kaiba makes a friend. Now that Ryou is gone, Kaiba is left with no comfort, no friends and an empty feeling in the place Ryou took in his heart. He opened up to a person who understood him on such a profound level, only to have his friend be taken away so soon. To everyone else, he is back to being a 'cold' man. This saddens me. However Kaiba doesn't hold any grudges and as much as he allowes himself, he moves on.
| NekomataFangirl chapter 32 . 12/2/2014
I'm about to pass out from tiredness, but I will not stop reading till I see who dies. It will probably be Malik, since Kaiba never loses, unless it's to Yami, and Yami's on his side now. Of course it could be Bakura too. Quickly, I must read before I lose it
Malik is collecting millennium items like Mr Mutou grandsons
Ouch, I know ears hurt horribly when bitten down on :/
I like the fragment with Bakura's melted hands. I'm glad some permanent damage has been done, it would be too good to be true if no permanent damage was issued to none of the guys. Except for Malik. He can die.
Pahaha I knew someone would be sensible enough to bring guns. Children, today we've learnt that guns save lives.
Malik's death is very juicily described. As revolting as he is. I appreciate it.
| NekomataFangirl chapter 31 . 12/2/2014
.FUCK -_- I should have known better -_- I was told of this prank -_- Miss Ulf, you totally got me there xD
Now for the real chapter:
If the eye went into Malik's eye, then where did his real eye go? Pushed into the back of the skull? Dripping down his cheek? I must know. Does the eye embed itself in one's socket, or would one have to physically push it in? Judging by the 'bright light' in last chapter, it would be pretty magical. I don't know, the prank got me all confused ;)
Malik: 'I was known as the greatest swordsmaster of our time, ranking higher in skill than even those of the pharaoh himself'- so Yami is supposed to be a greatly skilled swordsman? Then why the hell does he never use any white weapons? And for fucks sake, yet again I bet only Kaiba will remember to bring a gun.
| NekomataFangirl chapter 30 . 12/2/2014
Hohoho, Kaiba will be o pissed off- as soon as he left the game shop, Malik came back to ruin Kaiba's plan regarding Bakura's safety. I still dont know how grandpa managed to persuade Kaiba to let Bakura out of his facility.
Malik is such a delightful driver. I like thrilling car rides. Can you take me for a ride Malik?
Oh this has got to be the only story ever where everyone accepts Yami has to go on his own, without making a fuss about honour and friendship and then possibly even tagging along undercover. Props.
Bakura is so collected considering he is facing someone who will surely not hesitate to keep him occupied while Yami is making his way to Corshan.
It would be funny if the eye took Malik's mind and that would be the end of the fic ;) How the hell did he pull the exchange off? How can HE be the next one in line to hold the eye?
Hmm Malik may have the eye but Yami has Kaibathe rod
| NekomataFangirl chapter 29 . 12/2/2014
In the review to chapter 28 I said the truth was revealed early in the story, to my surprise. I did not realise for the life of mine that I was on the chapter 28/33. Apologies.
Even grandpa thinks Kaiba's an ass.
Now Yami that you've had your epiphany, go and try to make Bakura forgive you for battering his bodily remains. I thought you had honour Yami, that you'd never attack someone who's down. Ye, the thing is, maybe Bakura would prefer Marik now- someone who doesnt kick the everloving life ou of him after Malik's already tortured him.
Haha now you're screwed Yami- Bakura is blaming you for Ryou's death. (yeah not like it was Bakura himself that refused to listen, jumped to conclusions and murdered 'an angel') What's wrong with you yamis!
Why does Bakura get raped in every longer fic here -_- please stop raping Bakura.
Trust Malik to pick the perfect moment to ruin everything :D but I'm very angry about you violating Bakura, Malik. That is unexcusable. Torture people all you want, but keep your stuff in your combat pants please. And to think I defended you in Crimson when Afik said he will make you an eunuch!
| NekomataFangirl chapter 28 . 12/2/2014
Yami...:( stop this. I've lost all respect for you
It's official- I'm in love with the shrimp.
I didn't think the truth of Bakura imposing as Ryou would be revealed to Yami so soon
Paha, serves you right Yami.
I wonder what the pharaoh will do and feel once his shock subsides
| NekomataFangirl chapter 27 . 12/1/2014
'Mr Mutou asks darkly'- that is the absolute worst thing to get turned on by -_-. I'm awful xD
I wonder if that kind of horribility happens to every person Marik beds.
So I suppose Marik will be the one to reveal the horrifying truth to Yami and try t persuade the pharaoh to go trust Bakura once again?
Ah yes, one line later he says exactly that. I keep shifting from liking to loathing Marik in this fic. Right now I am liking him. A few days ago he was forcing his affection on Bakura, and now he is sitting by his side, all by himself having come to conclude Bakura is not his, furthermore he needs more than him
Kura you idiot, that's not the right way to tell Yugi you have killed your hikari 6 months ago and have been using his body in order to get into the pharaoh's pants because your earlier plan with killing the said pharaoh did not work out as it should have! More sensibility Bakura! I think i can see through you- knowing Yugi is an open-minded orange, you will try to have him side with you, after which making Yami yours again will not be as impossible anymore. :)
Yami! Seriously killing someone who is in a severely weakened state is not your style. If you don't stop, then Yugi will have to shout the truth out to make you stop! THEN you will be sorry. Or just confused. Or worse..more angry for the deception...
| NekomataFangirl chapter 26 . 12/1/2014
This is so complicated- Ryou's spirit, if it exists somewhere after being banished, is still not mourned for- everyone but Kaiba and Kura is mourning for the person Bakura created, not the real Ryou.
The guys won't be happy to see Mr Mutou brought Marik to their home
How did grandpa manage to persuade Kaiba to let Bakura be taken by him? I thought Kaiba intended on keeping him safe from Malik? Why did grandpa take Bakura, if tha yami is after the pharaoh? Oh what a cliffie :)
| NekomataFangirl chapter 25 . 12/1/2014
Uh Seto, stop desecrating Ryou's body. As if it wasn't enough Malik sliced his cheek and tossed him all around. Have you ever heard of a thing called dignity, yeah this is exactly what Ryou's body no longer has thanks to you playing electro-puppets with him cause you're not ready to let go.