|Reviews for Cry of the Wicked|
| NekomataFangirl chapter 9 . 11/29/2014
The front notes are intense :/
Yami, pull yourself together and go back to collect the shopping bag with your leather in it before someone snatches it!
End notes: religious persecution? You've mentioned before you decided to leave your family's religion, is that about your close ones disagreeing with your choice?
| NekomataFangirl chapter 7 . 11/29/2014
Why is Yami so appalled at the fact he is liking someone? He seems to be all over the place in this fic. He is frustrated, confused, always worrying and to add to that he is distancing himself from his hikari
Yami changes his entire outlook when he spots leather.
| NekomataFangirl chapter 6 . 11/29/2014
It's painful to think everyone thinks Ryou is still alive. No one is mourning him, no-one is grieving for him
Those chapters are so short. Ha, there you go Bakura, serves you right. Now you're in deep poop! You wanted to get close to the pharaoh, you got what you wanted ;)
| NekomataFangirl chapter 5 . 11/29/2014
I am liking the title of this chapter. I wonder how Bakura will dodge everyone asking why all of the sudden the straight A student has turned into a lobsterhead
Bakura, now you've defended yourself in the fight, everyone will bloody know you're not Ryou... thugh you could pretend you took over Ryou as you needed the body not to be mashed
That's exactly what Bakura did. Good move pillow hater
| NekomataFangirl chapter 4 . 11/29/2014
That was a pleasant, light chapter. I am happy to hear the next one will be more bloody. How can Yami have a relationship with anyone when not possessing a body? It would be a tricky one.
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/29/2014
Judging by the flashback at the beginning of the chapter, we will get a nice description of how Ryou managed to get blasted into non-existence. I wonder how Bakura did that
Bakura here is about as evil as Minkah was stealthy in Apophis. He is getting himself into uncomfortable and annoying situations while having an aversion to pillows and using exclamation marks when referring to a sandwich.
| NekomataFangirl chapter 2 . 11/29/2014
I am wincing seeing Kaiba. His role in Apophis is still so fresh. He doesn't seem so be so toxic in this story
Eugh, the description of Bakura puking could have been a tad less graphic, I'm about to start barfing
'perhaps the stomach juice I barfed a while ago' *reader throws up*
Ahh so Yami is acting so weirdly because he is starting to fancy Ryou and he's confused, I see
| NekomataFangirl chapter 1 . 11/29/2014
After sweet Misa got killed off in Crimson, I no longer feel hateful towards poor Ryou being dead here. Let's read
I am reading the first line in all seriousness just to ruin it all when the description of the carpet reaches me. 'Blue shag'. Perhaps it's a British thing with the word shag
It appears Yugi is a bit of a shrimp-imp in this story too. I am delighted. He knows exactly how to fake innocence and use it to manipulate Yami
I am relishing in Bakura's annoyance at having to pretend to be nice. His eye is twitching. I wonder how he will manage to drag it on when he is already near the edge after less than 5 minutes
I never thought Bakura would be big on interior decor. I can imagine him with a roller in his hand, sampling on the wall several shades and finishes of black from the newest Dulux range
Oh Bakura, you got yourself into a right pickle, have fun at school tomorrow!
| theabridgedkuriboh chapter 33 . 8/20/2014
*CRIES LOUDLY* A happy ending...I didn't expect it.
BUT KAIBA IS STILL LONELY. HE MISSES RYOU. BUT HE CAN MOVE ON. YOU HAVE DESTROYED ME EMOTIONALLY. I CAN'T THINK ABOUT THIS STORY NOW WITHOUT CRYING.
This was a beautiful story. I'm so glad that Yami requested me (BEGGED ME FOR MONTHS) to read it and i'm glad i did. This was truly amazing. I hope to read more of your stories very soon.
| theabridgedkuriboh chapter 32 . 8/20/2014
woot woot GO GERALD. THANK RA YOU GOT THERE WHEN YOU DID.
| theabridgedkuriboh chapter 31 . 8/20/2014
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HE HURT BAKURA. SLASHED HIS EYE OR SOMETHING. HOLY CHEESE!
| theabridgedkuriboh chapter 30 . 8/20/2014
You know, just imagining Malik with the eye in his eye is kinda...nightmare central...like seriously? Eww!
| theabridgedkuriboh chapter 29 . 8/20/2014
HOLY SHIT! *Girly fainting noises*
| theabridgedkuriboh chapter 28 . 8/20/2014
FINALLY! YES! THANK YOU KAIBA (I think) YOU ARE WONDERFUL (for now)
NOW WE JUST NEED BAKURA TO GET BETTER.
| theabridgedkuriboh chapter 27 . 8/20/2014
SO WAIT A FREAKING SECOND. YOU FINALLY LET YUGI KNOW THAT IT WAS ACTUALLY BAKURA THE ENTIRE TIME AND THEN YOU HAVE A CLIFFIE OF YAMI READY TO KILL BAKU? WHAT THE FUCK? OH MY GOD MY EMOTIONS ARE EVERYWHERE. *KICKS A BUCKET LOUDLY*