Reviews for Debt
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
Nicely done:). Not gonna nag for the FULL version but it sounds even better. Great job.
Onyxlight chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
Naught naughty Riza...loved it!
Andrew chapter 1 . 12/29/2007
Wow, pedophilia, fraternization and strip poker. That's a lot of crazy stuff.
RudePropeht chapter 1 . 8/23/2007
An EdxRiza. Great job Ed! :D
Kitsune6 chapter 1 . 7/28/2007
That was a good story. Until “I stacked the deck.” Then it was a great story. )
LittleLinor chapter 1 . 3/16/2007
XD just plain awesome! Evil Riza

And I actually like that you skipped the sex scene, it's off the point anyway :p All we need to know is that it happened

I think you go in my fave authors, btw
Reedemption chapter 1 . 1/18/2007
THIS WAS AWESOME! It's so rare to find a workable plot in a story like this, and this one takes the cake! Man, I hope the mature version of this gets posted!
Brandon chapter 1 . 11/1/2006
It was ok.
Sgt. Panda chapter 1 . 9/2/2006
HA! Well writen. The last line was great. HA!
Edward Elric chapter 1 . 8/30/2006
This was a good story and can you please write more?
malicious-alchemist chapter 1 . 7/29/2006
very awsome nicly done
ShaneXvga chapter 1 . 3/28/2006
I love it. Very well written.
Kururu soucho boy chapter 1 . 2/22/2006
A guy geting molested by a woman works. You know he would love that. Unlike a man doing that to a woman.
Mest chapter 1 . 2/14/2006
Nicely done, TONS better than most on AFF.
Azamiko chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
You are entertaining.
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