This was so good! Keep up the good work!

So beautifully written... A great reading...

Yeah, this was incredible. The writing and characterization we're amazing and on point, and the whole thing was just a pleasure to read!

I'm just glad that this isn't Elricest... I mean, if it's a lemon, and only a lemon, then maybe it'd be okay... but for some reason, I am oddly reluctant to pair the Elric brothers together.

honestly if I had to pick my single absolute most favorite fic in the entire fma archive, it would be this one. I keep coming back to reread it over and over again and it's gotten to the point where I have some passages so familiar that they're half memorized and it feels like coming back home every time I open this up. I wish I could favorite it again every time I read it but since that's not possible, at least here's another review and my eternal thanks for this one

Ahhhhh this is so good! Fics that explore Ed's eating habits always fascinate me, and I especially love how you've handled the whole topic here. Everything about this fic is so on point and I really enjoyed reading it!

I really enjoyed this story; this might be my favorite FMA oneshot so far. Typically, oneshots don't convey plot development as well as multichapter stories do, but you did it very well! (granted, this is a rather long oneshot lol) Thanks for writing!

I loved it. Especially I love how you remember all the - er - constraints? (not a native, me, not sure it's a right word) poor Al has to deal with. Love also the fact that you remembered about the automail - it has to take a lot of energy out of body. And generally - very impressive work you did here :)

oh wow. just... wow. this is incredibly beautiful! For all the times that it's awkwardly worded... this as managed to convey an amazing amount of emotion and realism for what it is.
I really love this...

That was awesome! I love the idea of Al being affected by Ed's waning strength.

This could be more than a one-shot *Hint-Hint*
But it's still brillant alone XD

This story is true though Ed is eating and sleeping for Al if Ed died *realizes something* Oh God if Ed ever died in the show Al would to he's the only one keeping Al's body alive

This was tense, in character, and just plain good

WHY IS THERE NOT MORE!IS THERE GOING TO BE ANOTHER CHAPTER! AHHHHHHH I CANT WAIT!

This was awesome! I was looking for a fic like this :D