Reviews for If at first you don't succeed
MyLittleHeartShapedBox chapter 6 . 5/25/2013
Good story. I hope you decide to continue it someday.
LadyElena17 chapter 6 . 9/19/2011
love this so far! hope to read more!
No Longer in Operation chapter 6 . 9/13/2011
that is an awesome story!
RedheadObsession chapter 6 . 1/9/2011
Love it!
Mrs-N-Uzumaki chapter 6 . 9/24/2010
This was one of the best to read as you kept both in character. Great job :) I can see that you would unlikely come back but I will say that it was good while it lasted :)
bexr91 chapter 6 . 7/11/2008
This is a great story, their dialogue matches their charectrs and i liked the structure and the descriptions not giving too much away about their feelings, especially Jack's. Eagerly awaiting the up the good writing!
rAiNe-x chapter 6 . 8/25/2007
I really like this story, you should deffinately continue
kenseikan weirdo chapter 6 . 6/14/2007
You know? An update doesn't sound like a bad idea...


Kenseikan Weirdo
shattered-demon chapter 6 . 3/13/2006
Liked the chapter, I found it funny how Jason is a total suck up but I really don't like him, it is funny though seeing him get please update and I will be waiting for the next one. ~Vero~
aisforaims chapter 6 . 3/1/2006
this story's great. keep up the great work.
PEROXIDE chapter 6 . 2/19/2006
so cool. Just keep on writing.

be seein' ya

ashley42591 chapter 6 . 2/19/2006
I love this story! update soon!

star chapter 6 . 2/18/2006
I love it! Please update soon!
Phillip the Nickel chapter 6 . 2/18/2006
Interesting I like how your taking this slow...good job please update soon!
BregoBeauty chapter 6 . 2/16/2006
Good chapter. I enjoyed the bit about 'playing nice' and Jackson's establishment of Lisa as his property. Not to mention her declaration at the end that she would escape. Please update soon! :)
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