Reviews for Grudges
lostinthought3 chapter 4 . 11/17/2005
This story had so much potential. It was a really great idea which grabbed my attention and made me want to read it. I feel you rushed it. What you wrote was great - interesting and descriptive but it felt rushed. You could have drawn it out had Sara suffering only minor incidents (like the poisoning) and suspecting Monica whilst the other CSI's felt she was being paranoid. You could have explored Sara's and grissoms feelings (interpendantly) reagrding Sara's suspicions. This would have made the final showdown grander. Also whilst I love the imagry of Sara being pushed through a glass window no one seeing it in the lab is a bit bizarre. Basically you have a wonderful idea and a gift for writing I'd just like to see you expand this story - not continue it, but expand it. What you have is a great first draft now make it a masterpiece.
LadyJess chapter 4 . 11/17/2005
Aww, wicked cute ending!
Dreamer with a Dancer's Heart chapter 3 . 11/16/2005
aw...cute ending in this chapter!
CSIGurlie07 chapter 1 . 11/16/2005
O my god. write more. now. Please?
EmilyMayVTheCrazyDinosaurGirl chapter 2 . 11/16/2005
missbrat155 chapter 2 . 11/15/2005
omg omg omg please review soon! please please please!
EmilyMayVTheCrazyDinosaurGirl chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
sweet, cant wait for an update
lantiscod chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
So many reasons? Gil is cheating her blood! Sometimes I would wonder if he is a vampire! What's go on about that sort of strange?