Reviews for Retribution
wotumba1 chapter 8 . 1/29/2018
glad the danger is over for now...
wotumba1 chapter 5 . 1/29/2018
LOL love your disclaimers!
nanuka02 chapter 8 . 7/19/2017
One of the most interesting, compelling, gripping stories I've read! I wish we'd seen more of Charlie towards the end, but that's ok. You really have a knack with words, and you write great dialogue!
Anka chapter 8 . 8/19/2014
love it XD
Cutter12 chapter 8 . 7/13/2011
Great Don angst in this story. I liked how Larry figured that he should go to Don. And, your disclaimers were pure gold. Thanks!
epalladino chapter 8 . 2/7/2009
Interesting story. Thanks, Beth
Sushi Chi chapter 8 . 11/6/2006
Great story! I really liked it a lot.
The Silent Rumble chapter 8 . 9/1/2006
this is giong in my favs. great work!
A Thing For Brothers chapter 1 . 5/6/2006
This is gonna be good. I can't wait to read the rest!
Aurian's Flame chapter 8 . 1/20/2006
Loved it! And even the Diclaimers were good. Usually it's just some boring drabble of "I don't own them", "I wish I did", "If I did I wouldn't be writing on this site", or even "We all know how this works by now". You actually had fun with it. Hope to read more!
Aurian's Flame chapter 7 . 1/20/2006
once again, incredibly good with action scenes and definitely reactions. This could honestly become an actual episode.
Aurian's Flame chapter 6 . 1/20/2006
PERFECT LARRY! You got him exactly and that's a hard thing to do most of the time. McShea's gonna get it - hehehe -
Aurian's Flame chapter 5 . 1/19/2006
I like the Allen characterization. Very well done. Dream sequence is fun, usually are. Music box idea, cool.
Aurian's Flame chapter 4 . 1/19/2006
Very good at cliffhangers. Love 'em!
Aurian's Flame chapter 3 . 1/19/2006
Megan! The plot thickens. - cruel chuckle -
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