Reviews for Expecting
Yesenia000 chapter 22 . 1/13/2015
Esto fue Hermoso! No pude aguantar en comentar algo debido a que cada capitulo se ha vuelto mas y mas increíble, la emoción de esta historia es simplemente palpable. Y si se que es un poco tarde para comentar sobre ello (bueno muuuy tarde) tomando en cuenta la ultima actualización de esta historia, pero soy nueva en historias TMNT así que estoy empezando a entrar en este mundo.
He leído varias historias en las que las otras tortugas quedan embarazadas, pero ninguna donde fuera Raphael quien tuviera que cargar con eso, así que fue lo que principalmente me llamo la atención para empezar con esta historia.
Debo decir que el principio fue genial, el que lo tomaran por loco, fue tan divertido, me gusto mucho el hecho de verlo desde el punto de vista de Raphael. Y lo que corresponde a toda la trama en general ha sido tan perfecto (si lo se, un poco dramática) OwO.
Aunque me gustaría hacer mas observaciones no estoy acostumbrada a ello, y también por el hecho de que esta historia tenga tanto tiempo (por un lado es bueno, así no he tenido que esperar por actualizaciones)
Bueno me despido, espero que mi español no le detenga de leer, he tenido que usar traductor Google para leer su historia, si se que no es perfecto pero me lleva al punto de lo que se trata de decir.
He disfrutado mucho de esta historia, ahora continuare con la lectura! Necesito saber que va a pasar con el Bebe!
Unseen Watcher chapter 3 . 9/21/2014
Abort. One of the few circumstances I'd condone it. Now his family just needs to clue in. Interesting. This generaly happens to someone other than Raph.
SleepingSeeker chapter 21 . 7/3/2014
Omg, Mikey's reactions to everything is just. . . gold. XDD
SleepingSeeker chapter 20 . 6/21/2014
This was a fantastic chapter! Oh the descriptions were really great! So vivid and clear - when he felt the knot in his throat after being so stubborn and willful and bold only to end up so helpless and at their mercy - man, that was awesome - I'm so evil. But I loved it! :D something about bringing down such a mighty and strong character, to break him down and make him so defenseless...dare I say it!? It's rather hot ):DD
SleepingSeeker chapter 19 . 6/21/2014
I really love how you don't just give us the big fight and wrap everything up so neat and tidy - things are messy - Raph doesn't quite know what he's doing, the 'goodguys' are all disjointed, there's no real planning and even when they try to plan it all goes straight to hell. I bet Raph is missing Leo something fierce right about now, lol
SleepingSeeker chapter 18 . 6/21/2014
Not boring at all! It was great! Raph dealing with the aftermath of his big moment, the ploy to get inside the castle, the wicked one knowing it was a trick and the big cliffie! Sounds like a solid chapter to me!
SleepingSeeker chapter 17 . 6/21/2014
Oh Raph's fumbling and his inexperience and nervousness was spot on - he is such a doll in this story! You did a great job with him!
SleepingSeeker chapter 16 . 6/14/2014
That scene with Kartel going to help him and the muscle pinch! God I love it!
SleepingSeeker chapter 15 . 6/14/2014
This was a perfect place for a cliffie! Especially since I don't have to wait for an update! Mwhahaah! Reading on! So exciting!
SleepingSeeker chapter 13 . 6/14/2014
The grenades should be called candy line made me crack up - it's these lines like that that just bring this story to life and fill it with clarity and snap! XD
SleepingSeeker chapter 12 . 6/14/2014
Go Raph GO!
SleepingSeeker chapter 11 . 6/14/2014
Nah, it doesn't stink! You're moving the story right along and I'm happily carried away with it!
SleepingSeeker chapter 10 . 6/14/2014
A TRICERATON! Omsqee I love it! And when Raph spanked that lady, I can't get that image outta mah mind, I'm sitting here with the biggest, goofiest grin in my face!
SleepingSeeker chapter 9 . 6/14/2014
Bahahaha! This might be my fav chapter, from the dude pi ing himself to the whole terrified conclusion of birthing through a 'man-gina' I am dying. This is awesome. poor Raph! Poor poor Raph!
SleepingSeeker chapter 8 . 6/14/2014
Aw, he loves the stars, there's something very sweet about that to me. And his thoughts continue to crack me up so bad - this is so much fun to read!
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