|Reviews for The Thin Line|
| Ha-seon chapter 41 . 12/2/2013
This was really good! I stayed up last night reading it, but I was too tired to review after and say that it was so worth it )
| fan chapter 35 . 12/29/2011
Ohh shit lol x3 things are going down, omg Gippal finally confessed!
| Fan chapter 23 . 12/28/2011
I would yell & rage but the stories complete xD YAAAAAAAY 3 lol, so far so good. :D
| Bri Secret chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
I loved your story! Spent the last 2 days reading it non stop! Let me know when u put up the sequel! I would love to read it. I couldn't find it. Keep up the good work! ; )
| pinkmmlover chapter 41 . 1/12/2011
I loved your story, especially the "LOL" ending. BTW, where is 'Til Death Due Us Part', i can't find it?
| AJ chapter 2 . 1/6/2011
Fun so far, but I just thought I'd let you know that 'malady' should be 'my lady.' 'Malady' means sickness or illness, and I'm fairly sure that's not what you meant to write.
| The Little Dark Angel chapter 12 . 12/6/2009
| Animelover6000 chapter 41 . 7/29/2009
Hey I like your story! I am going to see if there is a sequel and if there is you will be hearing from me! Bye:D
| Kylria chapter 15 . 7/21/2008
Arisa just happens to be my Japanese name.
| Manga-Fanatic chapter 40 . 3/11/2008
I really love the ending of this chapter!
It is really funny how they all run by!
I love the pairing Gippel Rikku! Yay!
I really like Astrah too!
The way that you portrayed Paine and Yuna was awesome as well, it was almost like they where a bit OCC, but it was really awesome!
| inactiveacount2323829831 chapter 40 . 9/5/2007
aw! I FREAKIN LOVE THIS STORY! -sniffle-WAAH! u write so freakin well! GREAT JOB 0
| Anonymouse chapter 41 . 8/21/2007
You should go through and spellcheck some chapters; there are some glaring errors that need a tending to. Otherwise, nice story overall. Though I do have to admit, everybody getting hitched was a bit of a turn-off. Weddings right, left, and center! Plus, the "mature" chapter was a bit disappointing. I mean, there would be more to that with all the sexual tension previously existing between them. Maybe that's just me. Maybe it's just your conservative-ish standpoint. Anyway, cheers.
| kli chapter 11 . 7/11/2007
rikku always asks if the ppl need something when they come to her.
lol. just a little something i noticed.
this story is very intriguing.!
| besaryuchild chapter 41 . 6/6/2007
you are a scary person. i feel bad for the person you're going to marry...
| Rogue Rikku chapter 41 . 2/16/2007
I liked this fanfic. Rikku and Gippel are a favorite pairing of mine. It seems from your profile that you like most of the same couples I do. Even to the people I hate. (*Whispers* I think Kikyo needs to die and stay dead as well!) Anyway, you did a great job with this story, even if everyone seemed to get married and there wasn't really even any single people. Still it was a good read. I can't wait to see what you did with Katara and Zuko!