Reviews for Rapture
Shikyo no Kyoufu chapter 22 . 3/10/2014
Taking care of two kids is hard enough but two super powered half human half demon kids with damn good genes. I didn't really think about it in the source material but Eva really did take care of two super kids by herself while fighting attempts on her and their lives.

Top ten Badass milfs definintly.
Cosara Peregringale chapter 36 . 10/27/2013
Amazing story. Makes you read it in one breath and can make laugh, cry and stay on the edge to the end.
Guest chapter 6 . 3/29/2013
Loving the fic.
Luna chapter 36 . 2/25/2013
A wonderful story filled with a delightful yet serious romance that is wholly entertaining. My only issues are, perhaps in the writing style which, while entertaining, well-paced, and skillful, lack sufficient description in its style. While this is fan-fiction and one would assume familiarity with the appearances of characters, places, and weaponry; it is still invaluable to put in sufficient description to not only aid in mood building but facilitate visualization.
Personally, it took many chapters before I knew to envision Eva as blonde, and even now retain some uncertainty in the color of her eyes and the appearances of any of her family members. There were, of course, also many other descriptions lacking, and while I understand it is a minimalist-style of writing, it can nonetheless be somewhat frustrating and detracting.
Tsukiyomi Moto chapter 36 . 9/18/2012
LOL! -dying-
Nintendoman01 chapter 25 . 8/24/2012
Okay, I seriously teared up a bit reading this chapter at the part where Dante and Vergil accidentally killed their puppies. You are really good at this, man!
Nelo Angelo chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
Sparda chose...

Rapture.

Seriously it was a great story and I'm glad I got through the whole thing
sadistic-neko chapter 36 . 8/25/2011
Lol. That last thing with Dante walking into a furnace because someone dared him sounds like something he would do as an adult. Great story.
Hakanii-chan chapter 3 . 8/22/2011
i like the story the idea is cool cause it's hard to find a eva/sparda story but i am getting confused at times eva is narrating one topic than i read she is off topic idk but i still want to finish reading it :D
Lenighma chapter 2 . 7/29/2011
He probably thought the movie SUCKED!

I'm so confused...
Lenighma chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
I'm gonna have to get used to the idea of Eva being...well, like Dante. I know, I know, it would make sense that she would have to BE badass, but...it's the 60s...I dunno. I know nothing about the 60s...

...That's it, I guess...

Sparda is awesome, by the way.
zenbon zakura chapter 36 . 7/2/2011
hahahaah vergil

suseptible to the stranger and candy/shiny sharp things lol and dante

hahahahahahahahahah

I love this story!
Tikigod784 chapter 36 . 6/29/2011
Always nice to see more DMC stuff. And this one was pretty hilarious to boot.

I wonder if you're going to bother with the new Dmc? Frankly I still prefer the older games, but with your writing you could probably make it interesting...
Jason M. Lee chapter 36 . 6/26/2011
Ah, kids. Universally distracted by the shiny and dares, no matter the species. At least it wasn't a Double Dog Dare...

I worship you, and I wish I could take lessons from you on your awesome writing skills. "We're not worthy!" a'la "Bill and Ted". :)
Eos Rose chapter 36 . 6/26/2011
Very cute! I approve! :)
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