I hope that you are doing well. This is really good and whenever possible I hope that you can return to keep doing what you are obviously very talented in. Thank you

P.S- Happy Thanksgiving if you celebrate it!

Please continue

Please continued !

I’m so excited to see where this story goes! It’s was a very enjoyable read.

So stocked to see how this continues, especially considering the announcement of the remake, I hope it gives you inspiration to write more and generates great ideas in your mind

So I am a new reader and I just wanted to say that it was really good! I can't wait to the next update

-xoxo

That was really good. Was happy to see it updated. Great writing per usual

That was really good! I had just read your whole story and it has so much detail. I had missed your old one but the new one is better and I hope you continue to post more.

Still pleased! I dare say it’s even more fine-tuned than the first version. I was worried you were going to change core events that happened. You kept a lot which makes me so happy! Great work! Can’t wait for more. Thank you for the chapters!

Oh my gosh! I’m so excited you’re back. I won’t lie to you, I’m sad that the old chapters are gone. I loved this story for what it was, and even back then, you had a talent for telling a story for an unlikely pair. However, I do understand where you’re coming from. I’d rather you enjoy your own story again and be able to tell it the way you can now. Thank you for allowing me to read your story (for free!), and dedicating your time again to this awesome pair. I haven’t even gotten to the first chapter yet. I just wanted to review your first note.

Welcome back!

This was so, so, so good like really... The writing style was so clean (pro)...
I desperately am waiting for further updates..
BTW I'm a new reader.. XO

Wow! Was that good or was that good! That was like the best thing I read (like no joke) and I am so happy that you are back..I think we all are! I was so sad when I read your message that you deleted the other chapters because they were amazing in their own way but..when I read the new ones..lets just say Wow..I feel more of Leon's character than in the last ones and I love Ashley a lot more and there chemistry as you always do was AMAZING! Anyways can't wait for more

Wheeew, what a change up, surprising that I read the quote on quote original version just two weeks ago, however I'm really glad to see you step back to fully rewrite this from the ground up with new structure.

I just wish the original could've been left somewhere, but not all is fair in love and war. Excellent exposition, and an excellent beginning to what is to come. Once again, kudos for the sheer dedication you have.

Solid take, I've always found Ashley wasn't as annoying as people portrayed her to be. Her AI was surprisingly well programmed, and in case she shouted, you had nobody else to blame but yourself.

On a sidenote, I'd appreciate things going a bit slower than the 'on and off kissing thing', however, other than that, the fact that you're still dedicated to over one and a half decades later is amazing, even going back to rewrite previously written chapters. That is something that not many writers would do. Kudos.

I really love this fanfic..pls continue!