Reviews for Hiccups
alen56 chapter 1 . 6/1/2018
i love it 3
Eclipse Shine chapter 1 . 1/9/2017
LMAO, that ending!
Ramona Flours chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
AHAHAHAHAHA I LOVED THE ENDING :D Nice fic :)
Lyneel chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
ha ha, lovely ;) what a twist in action and an unintentional revenge!
Jen chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
haha cute!

It made me burst out laughing in the end! :)
furisca chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
XD brill at the end! so cute!
Marumir chapter 1 . 8/15/2007
*laughs* luffy gave the hiccups to haramaki! i wonder how haramaki will sleep now?
BlackxJewel chapter 1 . 12/5/2006
poor zoro... zoro got luffy's hiccups... lol... wonder hos zoro felt...
Joel McHale chapter 1 . 7/27/2006
please warn us i hate yaoi and i think its a discrace to one piece if you hadn't added it it would have made me laugh other then disgusted warn us next kay? that way i won't have to read yaoi crap
MandraKara chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
Aw _ u should write a sequal. lol
Adnexus chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
I really really hope you are going to continue this, and update soon
Oddinary chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
Oh my! THAT WAS SO GREAT! FAVES! hiccup! MWAHAHAHA
Saiyako chapter 1 . 12/16/2005
Hahahahaha! Poor Zoro...

This is really good - I love the way they're going nuts over such a little thing, it's so cute, and so *human*. And sometimes we just need to be reminded that Zoro is, after all, human...

And I love that ending.
Griever5 chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
Zoro with hiccups! *gasps and dies from laughter*
yakuri-moe chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
hahahah a contagious hiccup! this was so cute! thank you for adding another fanfic to the ZoLu (only, no threesomes _ ) community, this was really cute . we need more more! what will happen now that Zoro has the hiccup? will Luffy claim it back? (we know how hehehe...)
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