Reviews for Hit the Ground
MerlinWinchestr chapter 1 . 12/22/2015
This is outstanding! I love the inclusion of Mara in the story, as well as showing Leia and Han's reactions (which I would have enjoyed seeing more of). But this was amazing! Immediately put on my favorites. Awesome work!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/17/2015
Wow. That was... like really good... and disturbing to some degree.
I loved it! Thanks for writing!
TheReader321 chapter 1 . 12/29/2014
Everyone of your stories are wonderfully written!. Thank you for entertaining me during my christmas break :D
Asyndetism chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
woah. really dark ending. looks like ambition runs in the family.
dragonball256 chapter 1 . 8/27/2013
Wow this was incredible. Loved it
Tilius chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
Interesting story.
liesmyth chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
this was gorgeous. well done.
bec chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
Wow! Loved it!
Ranglar chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
I'm really glad I read this. You manage to make such a short story still feel epic.
a random guy chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
so ...sad that he fell away from the light .
Alexxis T. Swan chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
I'd have preferred if you let him discover Leia was his sister, it'd have been interesting..anyway this was a pleasure to read! Quite dark.
Illulian chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
Wow! Great fic
bookfreak1317 chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
very dark and ddepressing. really good. Han and Leia was really sweet and sad. :'(

great job
Higashikaze chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
Wow... that was really dark and depressing. Not that I didn't expect that going in, but still... The scene where Leia and Han get encased in carbonite just made me sad.

This was wonderfully written. I'm going to go curl up in a corner and be sad now.
Deja Know I Been Lookin For Vu chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
...Depressing, dark...But amazing.

Really, you did a great job with this. Makes me want to hug Luke and beg for him to reconsider everything, but he has hit the ground on the wrong side of the fence.

The artistic sense of the fic-the falling motif and all-worked out really well, and you chose great snapshots to show.

But man, so sad!
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