Reviews for What She's Doin' Now
jen203 chapter 1 . 11/26/2005
Great fic!

So very sad as well, but beautifully written.

Who's the artist of this song?
KaylaKML chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
Good chap! I hope you will write a sequel :D
irishchick chapter 1 . 11/21/2005
wow this is excellent i loved it. look forward to reading more from u
kasluvs chapter 1 . 11/20/2005
Great fic! I was wondering, however, who is the music artist of "What She's Doing Now"?

Thanks : )
Keegan Paige chapter 1 . 11/20/2005
Hey, thanks for all your support!
Questionablelight chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
Aww... that was very melancholy. Beautiful but sad... oh so sad. Damn stupid Petie to the deepest depths of Netu (you should say that in public!) ... sorry but being a BIG S/J shipper I just can’t condone his existence now can I? That would be ironic. As for your Fic however, it was very well written, and your format was excellent; it annoys me, and I’m sure you too when everything’s in a great block of words. So I know you'd like some criticism, but as far as I’m concerned this is impeccable, and anyone who doesn’t like it, I wonder about their mental health. And I’ve done enough rambling, don’t you think? lol
Natters chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
aww. so sad. beautiful bittersweet fic. i like the format too.
trek-grrrl chapter 1 . 11/18/2005
I don't think there's any carved-in-stone way to do a songfic; I think you captured it well. You may want to give an "AU" (Alternate universe, in case you don't know) warning in the summary, though; I'm a major Jack/Sam shipper myself, and the idea of her doing what you depict in here, well... thank goodness it never came to pass! You probably know what J/S shippers think of HIM, I'm sure. Good job, though! I'm a stickler for grammar and spelling, and found nothing to complain about in your songfic. There're so many good songs for Jack and Sam; you may want to Google SG-1 songvids to see what's out there, or you can visit my homepage in my author's profile, and find the link to my blog where I review SG-1 vids and provide links to where you can find them. Not tooting my own horn; it's a resource for all SG-1 fans out there who haven't discovered all the incredibly good songvids available on the 'net.

Once again, good effort, I enjoyed it, even though the idea of THEM being together kinda squicked me out!