|Reviews for The Outsider|
| Aviendha Aviendha Aviendha chapter 2 . 12/15/2017
Great story. I especially love your portrayal of the Weasley twins. Treating twins as one character in two bodies is a big time pet peeve of mine (especially so-called twin speak. Did I mention the twin speak), and it is especially common in this fandom since Rowling did little to nothing to differentiate the two of them. Great job not falling into the evil trap.
| yeahboiii chapter 3 . 11/19/2016
So I've just realized that you put quotation marks when somebody is repeating something and put apostrophes when someone is talking. It's vice versa. Great story but I thought you might like to know.
| CDR. Grae chapter 5 . 9/14/2014
I actually liked the first chapter the best. The others? Halfbthebtime, I don't understand. Percy fighting vampires? Percy in a rockband? Can't imagine it. The first chapter's the one that sounds more believable. I liked Charlie's attempts to lighten the atmosphere, and Bill's serious demeanor. They have always been the interesting brothers because you don't know much about them. (Especially Charlie) But overall, this is good. :)
| Luzith chapter 5 . 11/23/2011
Not usualy a fan of Percy, but this was wonderful :)
| tryingtobestine chapter 5 . 8/12/2010
I hope you will update because it's a great story/series and I would love to read more of it :)
| L.A.H.H chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
I hope for more in this series soon! Thanks for writing. x
| anon chapter 5 . 7/14/2009
hey! I was clearing out my fanfiction today and i really didn't want to delete this but it seems to be discontinued. If it is could you please inform us it will be much appreciated.
| Klaratha chapter 5 . 2/26/2009
Is Rosemberg supposed to be Willow Rosenberg from the Buffy tv show? It's consistantly spelled incorrectly, so I've had a few moments to figure it out.
| Anon chapter 5 . 11/9/2008
Love Percy weasley the series! hes made up with all of his family now, will the next fic have a family get together? It would be great. When will "life Purpouse" be coming out or has the series been dicontinued cause its been years now!
| Potgenie chapter 5 . 9/17/2008
I've never read or watched any btvs before, but I liked this story anyway mainly because of your characterization of Percy. I hate how everyone makes him out to be some rotten and mean character when I feel that despite his faults, he's actually really misunderstood! Great job! Oh by the way, for your sequel, I was wondering it there was a spelling error.. shouldn't it be "Life Purpose"?
| Little Minamino chapter 5 . 2/29/2008
I really like this story. Mostly because Percy my favorite Harry Potter character and there aren't enough stories that paint him in a good light. Keep up the good work!
| ebdarcy.qt4good chapter 5 . 2/9/2008
Loved it! Great work
| Saetheas chapter 5 . 12/26/2007
So...upon realizing recently - as in about an hour and a half ago - that I had just read the most recent of a series, I decided to go back and read from the beginning. I rather enjoyed it and am quite eager to read the rest.
Just a note: you change Naoise's (how the hell do you pronounce that?) last name from Lanigan to Donovan and back...I think. It may have just changed once. But that was rather distracting.
Anyways, looking forward to "Life Purpose", I'll definately be on the watch.
| Seathaes chapter 5 . 11/13/2007
Do you know how weird it is to see your name in a fic when it's as uncommon as 'Chiara' is? The scene whereshe didn't react at all to being called 'Kyra'? Exactly my reaction. I found that coincidence hilarious. Beyond that, it was quite well done for a Xover fic. I don't usually read Xovers, not my genre, but I definately will not regret reading this one. Do keep writing.
| mou chapter 2 . 4/18/2007