|Reviews for Fall Apart|
| bury me among the ashes chapter 1 . 4/26/2007
Very well written and powerful!
| ilikebluepineapples chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
I was thinking this story wasn't that good, and then all of a sudden I had tears in my eyes and I was crying-just a little-but that made me fav it coz I /never/ cry. Honestly. Nevernevernever. Stories whne people keep reviewng saying they cried, I'm utterly dry eyed.
| Sterling Persuasion chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
Aw, damn. I used to have a policy about not faving more than one story per author, but you and Leafygirl both made me reconsider. xD
| To Die Laughing chapter 1 . 2/28/2006
I suppose he does have a point there...
Where, you ask? Why, throughout the whole thing!
| SmashTurnip Girl chapter 1 . 1/30/2006
You have my pity: being that much inside Orochi's mind must be horrifying for you. :)
Brilliant fic. *faves*
| Dark Nemesis 7 chapter 1 . 12/13/2005
Nice! The ending was quite powerful!
| Magical Poof chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
The death theme is rather nice. I don't see why people don't like reading about Orochimaru's twisted mind and such. This is fabulous take on why he does what he does.
| lilykt7 chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
awesome one shot! You have a nice vocabulary!
| moonlit reveries chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
it's nice! there aren't really a lot of people who write about Orochimaru...