Reviews for First Contact
FuumaKamui chapter 1 . 5/19/2006
whoa! that was written very nicely ! i like the way you have described the whole journey down into the basement and the plot is very believeable. good job!
bobalina chapter 1 . 12/7/2005
MWAHAHAHA! *cough* Keep writing!

Toodles,

bobalina
RenegadePineapple chapter 1 . 11/29/2005
Very well written! Great idea and presentaion.
blumarshin chapter 1 . 11/20/2005
This was really good. your detail was excellent. i really enjoyed this fic. your spelling and grammar was well done as well. This was belivable and realistic with the characters not OOC. This was a good fisrt meeting. Happy birthday to your sister.

will be looking out for your other work,

Blumarshin
entropic angel chapter 1 . 11/20/2005
Well written-seems to keep with the mood of Helsing, thoguh i don't know that much about this really-so my opinion probally dosn't count, but the writing is good
Guinn Pern chapter 1 . 11/20/2005
good one, do hope to see some more, it is good to get some insight on ones child hood