Reviews for The Non Real O'Neill
Syphon01 chapter 21 . 5/28/2016
interesting story

a pity it hasn't been updated in so long
Mathlete chapter 21 . 5/13/2016
OMG. I am such an idiot. Got this far and was surprised it was the last chapter. Doh! Please finish this story.
MattKennedy chapter 21 . 4/12/2015
Awesome story! :)
weezer42 chapter 21 . 3/11/2015
nooooooooo...this is so good! please, please, please...

*sigh*...I know it's in vain, but this is a great story, and I'd so love to read more...

truly appreciate what you've done so far and thoroughly enjoyed it all...
aveave chapter 21 . 4/1/2014
Great story. Are you ever going to continue writing it?
Kaitie85386 chapter 21 . 3/31/2013
You know, it'd be AWESOME if you continued this :) especially after leaving it like that.
I love the story, it's neat to see things with John in them.
blackash chapter 21 . 10/22/2011
This is such a lovely fic. I'm always looking for clone stories and this is one of the best. It's a shame you left at such a cliffhanger, but I've really enjoyed the ride so far. Hopefully you'll come back to this story one day!

Take care,

Silverlea chapter 21 . 9/5/2011
That was...unexpected.

I know that it has been quite a while since you've updated, but I've enjoyed what I've read so far. (Okay, mostly enjoyed, there were a few parts which were a bit hard to read instead of just skimming over.)

I particularly like stories which include Jack's clone, and I'd really like to read the rest of this if you ever finish it...
prudiisten chapter 2 . 6/12/2011
This is pretty good so disappointing its abandoned.
lauriewsmith chapter 21 . 11/20/2010
Fantastic story, very good portrayal of the characters.

I read alot of FF but this is the only stargate story on my faves list.

Its awesome!
purrfus chapter 21 . 11/12/2010
Amazing. And ended with a bang. Hopefully there will be more someday. ggg
irezel chapter 21 . 11/5/2010
whaaaaaaaaaaaaaat? NO MORE? D8 !

you should DEFINITELY write more chapters...finish the story? but don't leave it at a semi-cliffy! :(
n'Faele chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
When I began this, I thought John was a bit too angsty, but it has really improved since those first chapters. Continue it.
carick of hunter moon chapter 21 . 9/18/2010
The strength of this story is that it catches and more importantly holds the read interest and make (me) the reader want to read more your dialog is very easy to read and well written and the story arc is very good and developing nicely it a shame that it not finished
nased0 chapter 21 . 8/29/2010
Great fic, I love good Mini-Jack stories.

There are so many unanswered questions, i.e. who nuked this pedophile's brain with Goa'uld ribbon device and why he was a subject to the FBI witness protection program?
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