|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Story of Secrets|
| onepiecefannumber1 chapter 20 . 1/26/2013
update soon but can i make a suggestion is that dulmadoor isn't going to get harry the opposite he trains him and please make the story a little less gloomy and thank u for writing love the story
| elijahlover chapter 12 . 1/26/2013
Sorry good voldemort sucks xx
| patronusmagic chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
It's a good story, but you might want to proof read it for any typos' or spelling mistakes.
| Reader-anonymous-writer chapter 20 . 3/29/2011
Is Tom telling the truth, or is it a blatant lie?
If it was a lie, Tom would kill Harry as soon as he saw him (if Tom knew the whole prophecy and it wasn't made-up prophecy).
If it is truth, then Albus is a blatant manipulator, worse than I could imagine.
Who killed Moaning Myrtle when Chamber was opened? Tom, Albus, or somebody else?
I hope Tom didn't create Horcruxes here, because each of them requires death of a person, and it's difficult to manage creating them while killing only the people who deserved death.
Was Albus planning to set up Tom as a scapegoat even before Albus defeated Grindelwald? Was Albus's fight with Grindelwald also a plot to "prove" that Grindelwald was a Dark Lord and Albus was the leader of light? Albus was Grindelwald's friend, so Albus could persuade Grindelwald to go dark...
I always like Severus, whatever side he is on.
I hope, for the sake of Harry and his friends, that Tom isn't lying and that even though Death Eaters can be cruel, they don't attack without a reason.
If Tom is a liar... There will be a giant explosion when truth is found out. But so long, Bellatrix isn't mad, so Tom might be telling the truth. Besides, that large quantity of clear, non-foggy memories is difficult to fake, or memories wouldn't be accepted as evidence in courts.
What would Vol de Mort (Flight from death, in French) say if I offered him name "Tom Sawyer"?
Flight from death is natural, if somebody tries to accuse you of being a mass murderer and is going to kill you in a picturesque duel.
A marvelous riddle you are giving in this book. Light and dark exchange places, temporarily or not.
| HufflepuffWoman chapter 4 . 12/23/2010
u have sirius's middle name wrong according to jkr it is orion.
| V. L. Crawford chapter 16 . 11/3/2010
I don't know if I like them being with voldemort.
| V. L. Crawford chapter 4 . 8/12/2010
Fantastic. Harry is gone from that awful place and those awful people.
| V. L. Crawford chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
Yes! Harry is going to get away from those awful people.
| The Fourth Bride chapter 12 . 4/11/2010
AAGGH! WHAT THE F**K!
NUH-UH! NO WAY!
| A Hidden Saint and Sinner chapter 17 . 1/20/2010
three men and their "son" so cute and sweet.
| FredWeasleysFutureWife chapter 12 . 5/11/2009
I liked it up until you made dumbledore lily and james evil im not sure i can keep reading this
| Hakoirii chapter 20 . 3/30/2009
Wow! That is a really interesting twist of events. I kind of like it, it answers one of those unanswerable questions, "What if Voldemort hadn't been evil, what if it was Dumbledore who was in the wrong?"
| kbeaverssbcglobal.net chapter 12 . 7/14/2008
I've finally given up. You say in your A/N notes that it "just came to you." Well, it reads like it just came to you. You can really tell that the story isn't planned out. Perhaps you should outline your stories first so that they come together in the end. Regardless, I'm moving on.
| kbeaverssbcglobal.net chapter 2 . 7/14/2008
"Remus had grown up in France but his father had insisted on sending him to Hogwarts instead of the French Wizarding School."
Remus's father didn't insist that he go to Hogwarts. Remus only got accepted because Albus allowed a werewolf to attend. Remus's father didn't have anything to do with it.
| kbeaverssbcglobal.net chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
It's Privet Drive not Private Drive.
"There was a sort of garden by the play park that the adult’s would meet at to talk while their little darlings went off to play with each other." In this sentence and in others like it you confuse plural with possessive. It should simply be adults as in multiple adults. In the way you use it, it means something belongs to an adult, which doesn't even make sense in this sentence.