Reviews for A Father's Pride
Amber chapter 6 . 7/12
Who is taking over this story?
orhie07 chapter 6 . 7/6
well fuck that
orhie07 chapter 3 . 7/5
riverspirit13 chapter 2 . 6/21
Draco Please!
Jess The Killer chapter 2 . 6/16
hamzaabbasali1 chapter 6 . 3/9
i dont mind trying to take up this story
im sad u cant finish it but i understand.
contact me if u think i could continue this story
Penguin Thug God chapter 4 . 3/7
Tom hugging a child even if his by adoption is out of character. Harry announcing she's related to riddle in public in front of everyone was retarded, why the actual fuck would she announce that she's adopted by the Dark Lord? and why oh why in front of the School at Hogwarts? What next? The Ministry will know? As for getting followers the way they randomly popped up was nerve grating and didn't seem like it'd benefit the Dark Lord... Bellatrix has curly BLACK hair with Purple eyes or grey not blonde with blue eyes lol THAT'S Narcissa Malfoy's description. hmm Ballatrix's husband and his brother both have red hair, not sure if you put that in.
Penguin Thug God chapter 3 . 3/7
oh my mistake 11 with a thong. like it makes it any better. Oh time to add on shall we Weasley twins as friends, Hermione as a friend, and Draco as a potential BF.. . OVERUSED
Penguin Thug God chapter 3 . 3/7
oh God Draco x slytherin Harry is way overused and being friends with her Hermione is to. oh God and how is she beautiful and need a thong if she's like 10? Are you getting the age limit thing right? How? omg Least it's not her x Tom that is overused as fuck too
shbburks1 chapter 3 . 1/19
dumbledore needs to die make him die
guest chapter 2 . 12/28/2016
Minerva chapter 1 . 12/16/2016
Don't you think Voldemort is really out of caracter, giving a hug IN PUBLIC to hie daughter? The part about him adopting her doesn't bother me at all, but he is still the Dark Lord. Also, why would he want to inform insignifiant children that he is alive? Dumbledore will know and why would he want that? I doubt he will have been hit by a curse that make him age slower because otherwise, everyone will do this.
N chapter 2 . 11/28/2016
This is to flat. Hook your readers in
Guest chapter 2 . 10/28/2016
Artemis the Great chapter 3 . 10/8/2016
Riana Draco
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