|Reviews for Before They Were Old|
| Guest chapter 11 . 3/16/2013
Keep writing please it is a really good story email me your decision at
| Brian is Awesome chapter 5 . 5/30/2012
Brian is the best character on SVU. I saw on your profile that you hate him because you think that he "raped" Olivia. I have to respectfully disagree. I think if anyone was take advantage of in their one night stand it would be him because he believed it would lead to a relationship. Your story is interesting but I just can't read it all the way through because of the Brian bashing. I believe that everyone is entitled to their own opinion however I think that they should not force their opinion on anyone and you do this with your opinion of Brian. You will lose readers and reviewers.
| JUDE HARRISON chapter 11 . 4/2/2007
WHY DID YOU WRITE BEFORE THEY WERE OLD ANYWAY IF YOU ARE DISCONTINUEING IT? MAYBE 14 YEAR OLDS SHOULDNT WRITE FANFICTION
| unstoppablecheer16 chapter 9 . 6/15/2006
I love this so much! because:
1: I love Cassidy bashing *muhahaha*
2: I love Much and conspiracy theories.
3: And it basically is just cool.'
so have fun on vacation and hurry back!
| Toastuh chapter 10 . 6/12/2006
There are only two things wrong with this as far as I can see:
1) The chapters are a bit short. But that can be easily fixed.
2) Not all of the detectives are the same age. Therefor, they might not be able to be in the 8th grade together. Unless someone got held back, or moved up, whatever. Fin probably went to school somewhere different than Stabler and Olivia (read as: the ghetto). Just a thought.
Otherwise, the story line is good, and it focuses more on the crime than the personal lives of the detectives. I like that.
Stars given (out of ten):
| SmileyMiley chapter 9 . 6/12/2006
Liv's mother SUCKS! She doesn't deserve to be Liv's mother, Liv deserves someone much better! But, yes, I like the idea, so keep writing.
| PaigeMarieHalliwell id chapter 9 . 6/11/2006
Umm... no clue... lol...
| PaigeMarieHalliwell chapter 2 . 6/11/2006
I'll kill you if she dies. *smiles good naturedly to let you know i'm joking*
| Maureen Olivia Lockhart chapter 8 . 4/22/2006
What? Stupid cliffhangers. You need to update like RIGHT NOW! I COMMAND YOU! Great job.
| SVU101 chapter 9 . 4/22/2006
that was a mean clifie! i hate cliffie! update soon!
| Kelly of the midnight dawn chapter 9 . 4/22/2006
Oh I'm not gonna hurt you but I sure would love to kick Serena's ass a couple hundred times over. I think I explained in my last review my feelings towards Serena Benson and I stand by them.
I'm also all for the Furby killing. Let's go get those little bastards!
I can't wait for the next chapter, I bet it'll be awesome :)
Talk to you soon
Elliot and Olivia for Eternity
Merry Shipper Christmas
Death to Furbies
Death to Cassidy
| KaydenceRei chapter 9 . 4/21/2006
Oh, check that out! He's giving up the DNA sample, I hope it is that idiot! Hehe.
Is Olivia going to tell Cragen what she means? Oh wow! This is so interesting. :) Glad that you updated!
| theonlyxception chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
Mwahahahah!, I had to come see this bashing you were talking about.. so I haven't seen it yet, but I know it's coming!
One thing though as I've read the first chapter and scanned through the rest (for now), and I've noticed you seem to go through it without giving much detail.
Not meaning to bash, you've been there through a couple of my stories, but it might help give a little interest with a little more specifics.
Can't wait to read more!
Twist of the Scarlett Rose
| VeraN chapter 8 . 4/11/2006
It's great, please continue soon!
I can't wait. D
| See Jane Write chapter 8 . 4/10/2006
Poor Olivia! Update soon.