Reviews for Broken Wings
anonymous chapter 23 . 10/12/2011
I love this story so much...I'm so sad that it hasn't been updated in so long, but I understand that people have lives, can be lazy or get really busy. Still, I really hope that it's continued. It's seriously well written and the plot and characters are so well done! I need to know if Ren's okay and if they get Mitsukake to join! Please don't give this story up!
BloodColoredRose chapter 17 . 9/28/2011
u have officially done it. u have officially snapped my heartstrings and wrapped them around the reincarnation of chichiri. i mean, i liked him before...but this...this... *gets all teary-eyed* man, he's BEAUTIFUL! such a beautiful person! *sobs*

ok. away from my overly emotional moment. and straight on into another one.

I'M GONNA KILL HOTOHORI!
BloodColoredRose chapter 14 . 9/26/2011
i luv chichiri! i mean, byakuren! i mean...yeah. HE'S ADORABLE! I JUST WANTED TO SNUGGLE HIM! OMG! ...ok. that sounded REALLY weird...

anyways, if i really tried to snuggle him, i think i would accidentally break him... .'

anyways, i luv the personalities! i think byakuren/chichiri is more in character of the chichiri from the anime/manga. if not for the total lack of confidence... BUT IT'S ADORABLE! and he's still such a nice guy! ...oh wait, i do notice another difference. byakuren took his suzaku-worshipping seriously, which chichiri didn't. BUT AT LEAST HE'S STILL SWEET!

anyways, the chapter was great! it was ADORABLE! poor byakuren...getting hit with a baseball...on his blind side... i'm pissed at mikako, now... grrr...

but all's well at least chichiri showed up

wow, rapidly fluctuating emotions, ne? heh heh...

ja!
BloodColoredRose chapter 6 . 9/25/2011
DAAAAA! HOTOHORI'S HOT! omg, my heart feels like jelly... . i luv him. oooohhhh i luv his smile / / / /

anyways, great job writing this chapter! i luv it! i luv the visuals! especially luv the crimson tear running down Suzaku's statue's eye! great! (u can really see i luv blood, na?) AND I'M SO GLAD CHIRO'S ALIVE! DAAAAAA!

great job! luv ur story
BloodColoredRose chapter 4 . 9/24/2011
...damn it, u keep killing people! chiro...kun...DAAAA! HE'S DEAD! DAMMIT!

...although he died...so bravely... *sniffles* ...;.;

why must u kill people so much? *sigh* ...maybe i shouldn't get too attached to the characters, huh? but...u make it so hard NOT to... CURSES! I SHAKE MY FIST! (lol)

anyways, great chapter. the way he died...was so touching. i...i think i'm gonna cry. u just luv messing with my emotions, don't u?
BloodColoredRose chapter 3 . 9/24/2011
wow, tamahome IS a jerk. i luv the contradictions of characters b/w this story and FY i'm starting to wish that Yuu Watase thought of making Tamahome like this ha ha. and i think miaka should be a bit more like miko... i mean, miko can actually cook, right? LOL. and theres no lovey-doveyness after only, what, the 1st chapter? great job! i luv how much i hate tama- i mean riki right now - oh, how the hot one infuriates me...
BloodColoredRose chapter 2 . 9/24/2011
WHAT? TAMAHOME? THAT EVIL JERK/ SUPER HOT BOSS GUY IS ACTUALLY TAMAHOME? ...whoa...

AND WHAT THE HELL? SHE GOT SHOT!

damn. playing with my emotions. just like FY: THE NEXT CHAPTER...

gotta say i luv it though XD

P.S.

really? ninja with shotguns? LOL. it's very creative. although hilarious. XD great job!
BloodColoredRose chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
OMG, i LUV this first chapter! u're an uber-awesome writer! i especially luved when u were describing ueda-kun.

"i am not a stalker." LOL. then she tries to act all suave and all, and ends up tripping onto her face! "and i wonder why i'm still single." ROFL! GREAT JOB! I LUV UR HUMOR!

at the beginning of the story, when i was reading, that one sentence really popped out to me. "Mine started with a UFO doll." i was like "WHHHAAAAATTT?" O_o LOL.

and i luv the personalities u gave mikako and hoshi! great descriptions of their characters! i luv hoshi's dramatization of everything. really nice.

oh, and can u tell me what mikako and hoshi look like? like in hair color, eye color, etc.?

and i can't wait to read more! great start! this is most likely gonna be a VERY epic story!
Youn chapter 23 . 7/22/2011
Please continue this story! I started reading it back in 2009, and after more than two years I'm still waiting for the next chapter!
anonymous chapter 23 . 5/24/2011
Ack! I've been reading this story for a really long time and absolutely love it! It's just pure agony having to see that it hasn't been updated in so long, and the fact that it ended on a cliffhanger. *pacing impatiently* I need to know that the kid is alright and not drowning! *calms down and bows* Sorry for ranting. I'm just very excited for the next part in the story when or even if it comes out. Keep writing, your characters and plot are all very well developed and deserve to go on!
Guest chapter 23 . 2/3/2011
I'll be honest. I have been reading this story for for a while but just never bothered to review. I never do. But I feel I must this time. I really really reeaally like this story. I f
ThexWhitexPhoenix chapter 22 . 10/13/2010
I'm gonna review one more time for the last chapter! Chichiri teleported right? Tell me he teleported!
boyarina chapter 23 . 10/3/2010
this was riveting!
ThexWhitexPhoenix chapter 23 . 6/29/2010
yay! Your story is great! You better update soon :D
xXxScarletxXxSakuraxXx chapter 23 . 6/9/2010
very creative and original hope to read the next chapter soon
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