Reviews for The Rose Bros
Lolikon chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
Not bad. This is too short though.
Anais-Lovely-Angel chapter 1 . 11/21/2008
that stories can be interesting!

continue

byee

*Anais-Lovely-Angel*
Evil Riggs chapter 1 . 5/15/2007
Not a bad start. However, for readability's sake, you should divide your text further into paragraphs. First and foremost, make sure that when characters are talking, each different speaker starts a new paragraph.

Good luck!
The Tomohawk chapter 1 . 7/22/2006
bruce lee