Reviews for In His Daughter's Eyes
DemonVampireGoddess chapter 1 . 3/18
Loving it so far but going on 11 years and no update?
CerenbusSnapeMalfoy chapter 1 . 4/15/2014
Dumbledore's name is NOT Albus Bilius, its Albus Percival Wulfric Brian Dumbledore.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/14/2014
mary sue! btw, dumbledore's name is albus percival wulfric brian d.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/7/2014
Just so you understand that flame you got: you created a Mary Sue. These are 'perfect' characters without any flaws. That doesn't make them interesting though: they're quite bland to read about, as there's almost never any character development and ... to be frank, it's quite exhausting to read about how 'geogeous' 'perfect' 'blushing' 'shy' 'cute' 'dashing' 'wonderful' 'beautiful' somebody is every chapter. The Sue you wrote is not uncommon: many people create the Daughter!Sue : Sirius's daughter, Snape's daughter, Remus's daughter, ... Sues usually have loooooooooong extravagant names (that aren't real names) and even emphazise their beauty/perfectness; like your Sue's name, Cadee APHRODITE Elizabeth Snape. I mean... Cadee is uncommon, but normal-ish. Aphrodite ... APHRODITE. GODDES OF LOVE AND BEAUTY. SELF-EXPLANATORY. SUE. Elizabeth is normal again, but thus it fits with the 'long'. I just wanted to have that said, even though this story's quite old. Nice day
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
I know it has been 8 years but please please update
Team Major Whitlock chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
I love this story so far and I hope that you can update soon since this story is amazing and I can't wait for the next chapter. Just to let you know that if you need any help with this story either with ideas or just help then feel free to PM me no matter how big or small, I hope you update soon. Summer x
Peace and Long Life chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
great
EleKat chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
can you please continu since it has been like 6 years?
BlackxValentine chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
I find it interesting so far, I don't find her to be a mary sue, she is a different take on Snape's daughter. I do hope you'll continue this, even though it's been years.

I think it would be a good story if done correctly. XD
Jisbonforever chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
Hmmm I like this :) Update :)
Quitealiar chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
This is great! They're gonna be shocked! Update soon!
Jewel Magix chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
that was so cool! Please Update soon!-jewel
ScarletReid chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
I like it she's in Harry's year right
RaynaMathews chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
haha! i'm writing a story about snape's daughter too! i like this one better than mine though... good job! waiting for next chapter
Vylette Skye chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
It is really good so far and I love the idea. I hope you continue and write more about who Natalie was!
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