Awesome, awesome story! I can't believe you wrote an entire school year! You're my hero! I plan stories like that, then never finish them. I stayed up so late Friday starting to read this then spent *all* of Saturday reading it too. I couldn't put it down. Thank you for this wonderful jewel. I'm gonna go check out your other stories now. :D

OMG definitely THE best DP fanfic ever! I couldn't stop reading for days...I really should be doing my homework right now. Seriously, you had me laughing and aw-ing so hard...Really great fic.

I know it's like 2 years after you finished this but I really am in love with this story. One thing I really like is that even though you said you would make the characters more like actual people I didn't believe it but you actually did what you said you would I could almost relate to these versions of everybody except I am just some freaky homeschooler from florida who (supposedly) can't understand anything in life and should just be disregarded. Anyways you did a really great job and this is very well written. You get 10 gold stars for the quality of your story. I should probably stop ranting now so I'll just go now.

Bye,

Florida Alicat

XD mosh pits really arent for small people

me personally i love em...

but then again im 6'5 and star of the defensive line of my football team so that migh be a bit of an atvantage XD

MOSH PIT RULZ!

oh and that was a goodchapter

XD double mint

hahaha! purple crayon!

hahaha!

that was to funny!

i like this chapter it was good

This is, without a doubt, one of the best romances that I have ever read on . Strike that... this is THE best romance I've read on FFNet.

I can tell that a lot of love and care went into this work of art... It is what makes the story such a wonderful journey. I'm sorry that I didn't even discover it until now, because it would have been far better to have been with you from the beginning.

You nailed the characters, and you did an absolutely brilliant job in making Danny Phantom into a Young Adult story. The plotlining was riveting, although I noticed one or two slip-ups towards the very end(nothing big: Danny just mentioned ghost fighting in front of Kwan and Star, when they were never clued in about Danny's ghost fighting career...). I love your personality, and I really can't wait until my own Muse comes back from vacation so that I can write again. It's wrong to leave people hanging, I know. Your story might have just pushed me over the edge... :)

Have a very nice day,

Mr. Watch and Learn

Hm... I really like this story, a lot. Just one thing: You've been running the 'half ghost half dead' gag a little too much.

You like to employ irony and Murphy an awful lot... Cool. :)

I've read many of your stories and have to say I am one of your biggest fans. Unfortunatley this computer is not mine so I don't have a login or e-mail, cause if I did you'd be under my favorites list. My favorite stories of yours are The Art of Conversation, The Art of Science, and Links in the chain. I whole heartily agree that adults have the right to write fanfictions about cartoons, I myself am 18 and I wrote a few stories of my own. I just encourage to continue to write Danny Phantom stories and know that I am behind you all the way.

A very interesting and wonderfully immersive story. I had to read it from beginning to end! :D

Your triumph was to make the characters three-dimensional and wholely believable. You could follow the evolution of their relationships and characters. You could genuinely /care/ about what happens to them.

This is a fine work and you obviously are a real lover of Danny Phantom and his adventures.

BenRG's Rating: 8/10

“Lord of the Flies, that is quite uncivilized.”

Love the irony

I agree with ikatana. I have read others but this is far and away the best