|Reviews for A Fair Exchange|
| Shiro Ryuu chapter 1 . 6/18/2007
Is it just me, or is this, like, even better than the first one? Must pick out favorite lines to prove the point: “Usually there’s…bl-blood, involved somewhere.” and “It isn’t, you know. But I’m glad you think so.” and the whole big paragraph right after, AND the last sentence. Much applause, it was very sweet
| monsley chapter 1 . 2/16/2006
"Because I…I…because I wanted to, and I…er…like you. That’s the usual reason.”
Mal’s smile was returning, slowly. “It isn’t, you know. But I’m glad you think so.”
A perfect sequel. I love that exchange.