|Reviews for Can you Hear Me?|
| Fading Letters chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
Aw, lovely writing.
| Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 1 . 11/25/2005
oh this was lovely
I love everything you write but I especially liked this
a great one shot but I would have liked more!
| welcometotheoc chapter 1 . 11/23/2005
wow its really good. Thanks soo much for replying to the challenge... i really appreciate it and with such a high standard of work although I agree it would be much easier to read if broken into paragraphs but other then that it is absolutley freakin amazing!
| ChaseII chapter 1 . 11/23/2005
This is very good - your writing is filled with images, which I love.
One suggestion - for readers like me, anyway - it would be easier to read if it were broken into paragraphs. The words are lovely - but they're hidden sometimes inside the whole. You might want to separate them, and dole them out to us a few lines at a time, with spaces.
That way, they could get the attention they deserve from readers who, like me, shy away sometimes from long unbroken streams of words.
The content here is touching and heartbreaking. This was such a wrenching period in their relationship...
Very nice... thanks!