Reviews for Forgive Me
PippinPoppin chapter 5 . 7/6
I looove your writing! I think it's fantastic! "Forgive Me" is a awesome story and I loved EVERYTHING! The detail, the plot, everything about this story had me hooked! Keep up the AMAZING work! :D :D
Guest chapter 5 . 4/8
I honestly don't know how I can go on living now. That ending literally killed me.
I...I just can't. I can't even.
Such a beautiful story! You wrote the characters well, especially Dean. And at the end, I was so excited because John was being a good father...
buuuuuuuuut no.
Anna chapter 5 . 3/24
Omg John you are SO not forgiven
Unashamed Bookworm chapter 5 . 2/23/2015
I don't understand the last part when John read the piece of paper he wrote. One child lost and one rescued part especially. Other than that, great story!
Guest chapter 5 . 11/15/2014
Oh JOHN IS SUCK A JERK! HE LIED TO THEM! HOW DARE HE?! IM SO MAD NOW. But was still a good story, thanks.
Guest chapter 5 . 9/15/2014
I love Dean. I just love Dean. I love that Sam loves Dean. Oh the brotherly affection and protection! :D
Wow chapter 5 . 9/14/2014
Great story
Marsha Mallo chapter 3 . 9/13/2014
Wow! You are one heckofawriter, Ridley! In case you haven't already guessed, my name is a pseudonym. I used to write on FF myself, have only just gotten hooked on the Winchesters myself, ...really I would say only just discovered them, but it's more I've been rigorously avoiding another addiction. I wrote Equalizer, Batb (the 1st TV series, not the current one), and JAG(1st two were for hard copy fanzines) and JAG was on a dedicated fansite, first online experience. The last fandom I wrote for was also two brothers - Numbers. A real bad flaming got me off writing and posting my fic,but these two have the ole muse stirring. Quick, somebody stop me...addiction may have already started! Thanks for your efforts. I have only read a couple so far, but the a Tony the tiger great!
Mists of Ribbon chapter 5 . 9/5/2014
Nope. No forgiveness.
lolello chapter 5 . 1/10/2013
This was amazing. I thought John giving Sam those school books was a little ooc and I honestly though John was gonna give dean the impala, but other than that it was stunning. I don't think I've ever read such an amazing supernatural fanfic before, it almost left me in tears. Thanks for such a great story :)
zeroichi chapter 5 . 1/1/2013
Oh john! I.. Am Seriously shock at the ending... I should have expected that.. Oh y didnt i?
IdeasLurkingWithinTheDarkness chapter 5 . 9/17/2012
I must say that this was a very toutching story, I loved the way that you ended it with John saying "Please forgive me." That was truly toutching! Okay, now for the review... I am totally in love with this story, I couldn't stop reading it once I started! Thank God 'YoungJustice101' told me to read this story, because I loved it!


P.S. Can't wait to see more from you:)
Miss Light Bright chapter 5 . 7/6/2012
Wow you scared me for a second with that funeral scene. I thought Dean died!
thethreebroomsticks69 chapter 5 . 4/2/2012
this is great! please, write some winchester fam-bonding fics! although, this is the first one of yours that i've read so ...

but, keep writing!
ackeberlynn chapter 5 . 2/23/2012
Oh, John. :(

I was almost put off by what I thought was a poor, out-of-character ending, until I read those last few lines.

You capture the heartrending tensions of the dysfunctional Winchester family very well.
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