Reviews for The Tension and The Spark
shaggard chapter 9 . 2/23/2011
i like the story pretty much so far. you think the characters are a bit too OOC but i don't think it is too much- not disturbingly anyway. harry-greg pairing is pretty OOC i must admit but this is the first time i have come across that couple and it's interesting to read it. as for the sshg couple i think things have progressed at a good pace - don't like fics in which they are all over each other within two days, things progressed gradually in this one and there had to be a bit af a OOCness on snape's part otherwise it wouldn't have worked at all in the fist place right?
the-omnomnom-phenomenon chapter 14 . 2/5/2011

It took forever for them to get back together!
the-omnomnom-phenomenon chapter 13 . 2/5/2011
Dude. I thought they were on the mend. And then, they break up.

the-omnomnom-phenomenon chapter 10 . 2/5/2011
Well at least it's a start.


But it's a start.
the-omnomnom-phenomenon chapter 9 . 2/4/2011
I am going to rant. Because during this whhoooollle chapter, I didn't know whether to laugh or cry.

Because Hermione and Sev are being dumb.

I never wanted to strangle the both of them as much as I want to now.

And I can't even throw anything in anger, because it's 2:48 a.m. in Florida.


And this Prof, Matthews thing. No.

No. No. No. No. No.

Just No. I hate her.

They better make up in the next chapter. Or I shall leave a strongly worded review!

And the misleading chapter title! "I Forgive You"

Sure, Sev is gonna forgive Mione.

But when?

(Still loving the story!)
the-omnomnom-phenomenon chapter 8 . 2/4/2011
I was afraid when the title of the chapter was 'Void'

I was afraid when Sev and Mione fought the first time.

I was afraid when Sev and Mione fought the second time.

I was afraid when Draco started getting all 'touchy'

And then, she cheats.

And you basically forshadowed that Sev is gonna find out.

I don't know whether to cry, or to imagine myself strangling you.

I love the story though!
mariaah chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
I came across this story years ago after reading "Afterglow" and found that not only could I stand the SSHG pairing, I loved the maturity between them.

My friend recently started reading them (SSHG fics), and I found myself searching frantically to find this.

I love your work, and hope that you'll continue to write.
JohnMunchIsMyJew chapter 14 . 12/17/2010
I almost peed myself at the ending! Spectacular!
WannabeWolfe chapter 14 . 11/23/2010
Poor Severus and Hermione were really put through the wringer but it all wrapped up nicely in the end. This was a fun read, thank you for posting.
flowerypetal chapter 14 . 10/26/2010
i really don't think that any child of snapes would end up in hufflepuff. but you know its your story. which i did love it by the way.
Pepe Le Pew chapter 14 . 9/4/2010
This was a decidedly amazing story!

I loved it through and through. I loved the difficulties they faced and I bloody well loved Gregory Goyle in this story! He was just awesome. Everything about this story was just exceptional and I loved how it ended, sappy or not.

This is a gem of a story!
JxIHarkness-Jones chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
Heyy just read your story... its awesome... i was wondering if you could tell me the name or the author of some of the HP/DM stories with this kind of plot you have read... thank you

Again amazing storyy :]

beexfeatheryduster chapter 14 . 5/26/2010
well, what can i say about this fic eh? It was so enjoyable, i enjoyed every word. Your writing is wonderful. You had a good balence between dialogue and narrative. Plot twists everywhere and there really never was a dull moment. Thank you for posting this, really it was brilliant and was the perfect treat to read after my exam
Alexa1993 chapter 14 . 5/9/2010
Veeoh315 chapter 14 . 2/15/2010
I really enjoyed this story, so much that I read the whole thing in one sitting! I was pleasantly surprised with this story because I thought it was going to be a textbook romantic comedy plot line. However, it was original and a very enjoyable read. Thank You
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