Reviews for My Pearl oneshot
221BluePoliceBox chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
I liked this it was good you can actually hear Jack's voice in your head! Excellent stuff!
meowbooks chapter 1 . 12/26/2005
Lovely, very much so! I always imagined Bill meeting her in a more refined setting, but yours is certainly a possibility. I love your prose, sounds just like a person telling a story 'stead of some person struggling to find the words.

Just like to point ourt a few typos-shoulder,liquor and focused.

Belated Merry Christmas! Happy New Year!
Slinky-and-the-BloodyWands chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
You really kept Jack in character! Great job! Why don't you have more PotC fanfics up!
shadowglove chapter 1 . 11/29/2005
hey, that was funny! I can honestly see Jack doing and saying that and I imagined Bill (a thicker maybe? version of Orly) there in the heap of sunburnt drunkards laying on the ground. lol. funny.
rememberedenx3 chapter 1 . 11/25/2005
lol, very much like jack, entertaining u to the point where u forget what he was originally suppose to say.

"In Conclusion: Who am I fooling when I say 'in conclusion', really I have no idea"

haha, he has no idea what he's tlking about. that was a great read!
Dragon Jadefire chapter 1 . 11/25/2005
This is really great story, I love it! You should write a sequal to it! Keep up the great work.

Dragon Jadefire