|Reviews for A Heart's Desires (Revised 2014)|
| momiji-k chapter 1 . 10/15/2006
That was very nice!
After finally getting a chance to watch the first DVD boxed set of Voltron I am now craving more. Since the next box doesn't come out until next month I have been seeking fan fiction.
So fare I like what I have read for yours. They are very good. :D
| KittyLynne chapter 1 . 12/3/2005
There's a completely different mood pervading this short story...the angst and romantic tension have increased. Allura seems to be asserting herself a lot more in both her personal and professional life. I like that development, and the way that you've characterized it. You go beyond the characture of her as a petulant, headstrong princess to show that Allura's 'obstinancy' is stemming from the process of her maturation into womanhood, and all that that entails.
You also feature the most beautiful description of Allura (when she's standing in the moonlight) that I have ever read (and you know I've read tons of fics!)
Also just love the exchange between her and Keith at the end...for once, she's one up on him! :D
I will be back to review 'Just Allura' a bit later...Until then ...Keep writing!