|Reviews for A Mid-Summer Night's Swim (Revised 2014)|
| StarDuchess chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
Ha ha! This part was hilarious. His plans completely backfired! Good job.
| momiji-k chapter 1 . 10/15/2006
That was pretty funny. I was laughing pretty good those last few paragraphs. :D
| KittyLynne chapter 1 . 12/3/2005
Things are progressing...Allura is experiencing the first vestiges of physical attraction, Keith is struggling to hold back, and Lance is realizing that things are more serious with the Captain than he thought.
This whole episode did much to move along the dynamic between these three; one can already see Lance establishing himself as Allura's condifidant and matchmaker, even if he's not aware of it himself yet. Allura is so cute with him, but alas, it's obvious there's no attraction there as the virginal princess had absolutely no cumpunction about 'pantsing' the guy...LOL!
Loved the last line. * giggles as she pictures Lance picking fig leaves to hide himself before traipsing up to the castle*
Once again, well done. _