|Reviews for A Lovely Day for a Picnic (Revised 2014)|
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/22
This is such a cool writing style! Good characterization! It feels as if I was there with them.
| KittyLynne chapter 1 . 12/3/2005
I love how your one shots build on the happenings of the previous ones, yet can stand alone as 'episodes'.
Your writing is descriptive, yet concise. I appreciate the subtle way you convey humor and deep feelings; you let the characters and their actions tell the story, and that's how it should be. _
Lance is such a stinker, but he's a loveable stinker. Just when you think he's mended his ways, he comes up with another one liner:
Well, maybe you weren't overreacting."
"I'm glad you see it that way," Keith answered, his tone one of relief.
"Yeah," Red Lion's pilot continued. "Your reaction's understandable when you take into consideration that maybe you really do have a crush on the Princess."
LOL! Quintessential Lance! :D