Reviews for The eyes that lost their twinkle…
CarsonandMrs.Hughes4ever chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
A great story. Very well written.
nilaea chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
I really like this story - well written and with a strong feeling in it. well done :)
Sytravious the Drak chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
I like how you show a human side to him. I seek to do the same with dark characters. nice one shot
yrl chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
wow i got to say this is really good, awsome, i always wondered a bit of how dumbledore acted when no one was around, and well this is a really interesting view, keep it up u have quite a bit of talent
rachel chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
i really like your portrayal of the characters, but...i dont get what happened! maybe im just tired...but when did this happen? is this guilt about the hard childhood harry had, or did the dursleys kill him or something? sorry, im just confused.
Brigid McG chapter 1 . 11/26/2005
in awe... fascinating perspective
Jeefus chapter 1 . 11/26/2005
This was neat to read. Great job
cato1850 chapter 1 . 11/26/2005
This was very good, and so sad. Dumbledore has always been one of my favorite characters also.
OperaGustus chapter 1 . 11/25/2005
I like how this story turned out! Keep it up!

a-dandy-lion chapter 1 . 11/25/2005
it was a great attempt. straight on. i think dumble was off in JK's sixth one, but it was just us getting to know him better... i suppose. i loke ur dumble. u rocks!