Reviews for Telephone Lines
Lindra chapter 1 . 12/20/2007
Oh, this is lovely.
bridges chapter 1 . 8/26/2006
Simple, in an eloquent way.

An interesting take on the

would-be ho-hum routine of

life in China.

The last line is a powerful

closing (though I don't really

know why I think so, besides

the fact that I write like that


[ favorite ] &I like your

writing style.

- ex.
mnemosynegreen chapter 1 . 5/12/2006
Aw! This was Fantastic!
ee970 chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
This is really nice, just a great little vignette of their life in China. I think you do a great job of catching the characters and making them seem alive in a short space. Great!
osmalic chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
This was nice and fluffy, a wonderful take on Yang Hai and Isumi's relationship that takes place within China. I love Isumi's view on how he doesn't miss Japan-not because there is nothing to miss but because all he could miss can be found there. The way they naturally fall into routine speaks of their ease, and it was nicely conveyed. Thank you for writing.