|Reviews for When Angels Fall|
| DarkJackel chapter 3 . 12/9/2005
Nice, though after justice has been served it would help if they dialed down the murderous intent.
Actually I would half expect the other Senshi to attend, not to mourn but to show support for Usagi and give her, and maybe her kids, support in what will undoubtably be a though time. Besides it is just the friendly thing to do for a friend that has been gone for a long time.
| Upgrade chapter 3 . 12/9/2005
Well, pretty much everyone knows what happened now.
But can this peace last?
Probably not. But that's up to you, now isn't it?
Keep writing, I want to know for sure.
| dennisud chapter 3 . 12/9/2005
Wow you sure are prolific, and yet qalitative as many of the established authors. I can't wait to see the funeral and IMHO whomever had taken Ranma's life WILL show up then.
I'd love to see the NWC join the Tsukino Family in vanquishing the foe and then when the smoke clears what then?
Well I can't wait to see!
| AzureSky123 chapter 3 . 12/9/2005
| bissek chapter 2 . 12/6/2005
Somebody needs to explain what honor really is to the Tendo/Saotome household. Everybody there, with the possible exception of the late Ranma, didn't have any.
Genma:Using his son's honor as a marketable commodity. Selling it more times than it existed. Theft. Manipulating others for goals that only serve himself.
Nodoka:Coming up with the idea of the seppuku contract over an abstract and arbitrary standard.
Soun:Abandoning all responsibility for his family for a decade. Aided Genma in manipulations.
Akane:Violating her sworn word about not hitting Ranma... several times a day. Attempted poisonings. Never once apologizing for damages done when it was proven to be unjustified.
Nabiki:Blackmail, gambling, underage pornography. Extenuating circumstance-profits of said illegal activities was used at least in part to support household when her father would not.
Kasumi:Hers is a sin of inaction. She is the only real authority figure in the Tendo Dojo, and she never can discipline above "Oh my, that wasn't very nice." By refusing to make everyone else take responsibility for their own actions or punish them for their numerous wrongdoings, she is tacitly telling them all that their actions are permissable. She dishonors herself by not attempting to curtail the dishonorable activities of virtually everyone around her.
Even if you accept Nodoka's premise that honor is all that is important, you should make certain that you have it.
| Wonderbee31 chapter 2 . 12/6/2005
Great section here, and really looking forward to how things turn out in the end of this one.
| A.Nonymous chapter 2 . 12/5/2005
I've got faith in Innortal...
Ya, Ranma's coming back. Any way you look at the alternative is worse.. An SM-TNG fic with a handful of Mary-Sues?
For my money it's not "when" Ranma comes back, but as what... I'm hoping for Major Ranma of "Ghost in the Ranma" or "Ranma Inverse" the Demon Spooker. Anything but Ranmaball-Z or Card Captor Ran-Ma-Gi-Yo... There are some things that just should not be crossed with.
As I said. I have faith in Innortal...
Just make sure that Flower-boy is put in his place...Maybe a matchup with Tsubasa.
| ron chapter 2 . 12/4/2005
great chapter, update soon
| hmr chapter 2 . 12/4/2005
Another Great chapteR! YAY! Ranma/Usagi paiaring! More! I hope Ranma comes back. Keep writing and update soon!
| Trugeta chapter 2 . 12/4/2005
Really good. Looking forward to more.
| tenchi111 chapter 2 . 12/3/2005
good story so far, but please bring back ranma.
| Wharpt chapter 2 . 12/3/2005
I tend to agree with some of the other reviewers - You're bringing Ranma back. Otherwise, why not put this in the Sailor Moon crossovers category? At this point, he's now been without his family for four hundred years. Best guess is that Kuno and Happosai will try to banish the Tsukino's and rip open a new portal. Who's there to jump back through? Our lost Angel, Ranma. How about a nice two-for-one swap - Happy and Kuno for Ranma? Maybe send Cologne along for filler.
| griffenvamp chapter 2 . 12/3/2005
great i love it hopr you please hurry up with the next chapter.
| billy13579 chapter 2 . 12/3/2005
kewl story :D
| WillLeung chapter 2 . 12/3/2005
gr8 chapter, looking forward to the next.
will there be any chapters on the null point prison?
as in, Ranma?