Reviews for Two Worlds, One Love
Guest chapter 48 . 6/1/2013
That is an awesome fanfic! Please update soon because I like it when kakashi is already trying to change hard for emiri! I love your story! Please update soon!
ThePathUntaken chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
Guest chapter 47 . 8/5/2010
Wow i love this story and i really hope you decide to continue writing it! You have already written so much you just need to finish it up now! :)
realbojangles chapter 48 . 7/4/2009
NANI? NANI NANI NANI? YOU HAFTA WRITE MORE *begs at your feet* plz plz plz i need this story...*sniffles* plz *gives you a cookie* write more plz? _
realbojangles chapter 34 . 7/4/2009
hi i'm madi i like your story but you got the author of makeout paradise wrong - its jiraiya *drool* lol but yeah (i hope i don't sound like an ass though)
Heartless-JT chapter 9 . 3/15/2009
simply entertaining and sublime.

But...Gai is too...ecentric than usual...

he's more 'cool' and saying, "Let us train harder to achieve the beauty of youth." Trying to be all suave and on and on about youth. Your Gai is too...submissive; too I LIVE TO SERVE. kind of wierdo, y'know?...ok, just ignore me...
xiMaryFairy chapter 48 . 1/2/2009
I like this story better...
Blood Zephyr chapter 6 . 11/2/2008
.* These OCs sound Chinese to me... And we all know that NARUTO is Japanese in origin...
MaemiSmile chapter 21 . 7/24/2008
Kakashi sleeps naked, as you said before... Doesn't that mean he's sleeping naked with Emiri on top of him? hehe... that's sounds wrong. Love the story.
AnnabelleLee13194 chapter 48 . 3/29/2008
AW, But I liked this story just the way it was! PAMS!
megananananah chapter 18 . 11/23/2007
story is amazing so far(what I've read so far that is.)You are seriously like my hero.I don't remember what chapter it was you said it,but you talked about flaws and how emiri isn't super model skinny and beautiful,I thought that was sure as hell made me feel alot better about myself,so thank you,very up the good don't take this as creepy,I just like your way of thinking.

(and holy crap you watch the same exact shows as I do!*giggles*
fnnyjnny1414 chapter 48 . 11/12/2007
but i liked THIS story!

.. the celibate idea sounds good though.
Mojo817 chapter 7 . 11/1/2007
Um... seems a little bit cookie cutter, but other wise, its sound. Also, how can you live and never have chinese/ japanese food? theres got to be some time when moms running low on funds so she treats you to the low-costing world of cheap chinese food.
jgsparks chapter 2 . 11/1/2007
i love this story and have read some of it before...but lol i lost it kinda...forgot the name and where it was haha. But i don't like how they had no idea about the car and stuff because in the mange and in the anime, there are TV's and microwaves so why cant cars and USA exist? than again it works that they don't exist or she would have been sent there...
Shorthand chapter 1 . 10/23/2007
*Frolics around the room like a maniac* Yess! I finally found a great KakashixOC to read instead of doing my precalc homework! I've only read the first two chapters so far, but I love it! Your prose is quick, efficient, and funny! You've really got the whole dialogue thing down pat! I can't wait to read more of this!

Keep up the great work!


P.S. Thanks for your comment on my KakashixOC. :P
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