|Reviews for Caitlin's Adventures at Hogwarts|
| GunsFallSilent chapter 4 . 12/21/2015
Caitlin doesn't catch it, then gets a position where the main thing you need to do is catch? wtf? Also she acts like she's 8.
| Nightmare Alley chapter 5 . 5/19/2006
There is a word for characters like this.
Avoid Mary-Sueage at all costs. If you cannot avoid this, (you know, making a charater beautiful and nice and shy and perfect), then please, don't write. Just don't.
1.) Give your character at least one big flaw in her appearance. Hermione, for example, has bushy hair and buck-teeth. We like her like that.
2.) Give her one big flaw in her personality (as well as several small ones-nobody has perfect, or even almost perfect personalities). Maybe he/she's mean and judgemental, but something happens to make him or her improve in the end. Or not improve-either works.
3.) If JK has already made a family, don't add to it. Hermione doesn't need a sister, Harry doesn't need a twin brother, and Dumbledore doesn't need a daughter. This definitely applies to Fleur. If you're going to make an OC (original character), make a new family to go with them.