|Reviews for When|
| Scarym chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
I just spent the last week or so reading a lot of your fic. Paillions, Spider, Wicked and The Frail, Specter and When. I really enjoyed reading them. Lots of Physical and emotional whump. You certainly put John & Rodney through a lot.
I orginally came here to read When but then I saw that it was sort of a sequel. So I decided to start from the beginning with Pavillions.
I am going to have to check out the rest of your stuff.
Thanks for writing.
| WickedBlue chapter 14 . 6/7/2010
Great fic. I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you very much for writing it.
| Calamitynexus chapter 14 . 9/18/2009
Another awesome story. I loved it.
| Space1Traveler chapter 14 . 3/25/2009
O, YOU are GOOD.
Thanks for a wild, whumping, and insanely fun (but white knuckled) ride.
| Negolith chapter 14 . 11/22/2007
That was a perfect dessert for a nice, peaceful Thanksgiving! And it even kept me from working on my own story for a few hours. We-ell, maybe *that* wasn't such a good thing - Shadow's Tale won't write itself.
And anything with Looney Tunes references is okay by me. :)
And John should really be more worried about, say, Nair instead of razors...
| Negolith chapter 13 . 11/22/2007
McKay thought enough with the mollycoddling and yelled as loud as he could, “Shut up Sheppard!”
All commotion stopped. And like closing the locket, Sheppard’s veneer snapped into place when he woke up. There was a second or two pause before he heard Sheppard's voice.
“Uh hey Carson, Ronon. Are we going steady or do you just like to hold hands?”
| Negolith chapter 12 . 11/22/2007
Hey, craptacular is one of my favorite words! Then there was the one Thanksgiving when I was in college where the day after I got home the main city sewer line backed up in my parent's basement. That I coined Mount Crapsuvius...
Oh, and the story is a nail biter so far... :) I forsee an entire *case* of whup-ass a comin'.
| Negolith chapter 8 . 11/22/2007
O, Papa Jae is *so* gonna get it.
| spookysister7 chapter 13 . 10/9/2007
When he heard the clicks of multiple P90’s and a South Carolina lilt, he laughed hysterically.
“Hey y’all and welcome to the Alpha Site. Now you will put your weapon down and remove your boot from our Commanding Officer or if’n you twitch, Sgt. Smith over there is going to take your head clean off.” Master Sergeant Releford Lashley ordered Bama holding his own P90 up and ready. “Sgt. Smith, do you have him?”
| Ozlex chapter 14 . 9/25/2007
I'm reading yours stories in order and so far I think that's my favourite. Perhaps it appeals to my sadistic nature with the sheer amount of whumpage to one Lt. Colonel but truthly I think its just a great story.
| Astraldust chapter 14 . 8/30/2007
I've just read this little gem. Wonderful story. Thanks.
| Kodiak Bear Country chapter 14 . 11/2/2006
I've been working backwards and have been looking forward to reading this one and it didn't disappoint! A big ouch for Sheppard, lots of angst for McKay, perfect for me! *grin*
| Estel Kenobi chapter 14 . 5/2/2006
Genius...pure literary genius.
| Estel Kenobi chapter 2 . 5/1/2006
HOLY CRAP! I sent that last review before I actually finished the chapter...DUDE! That was one of the absolute best endings to chapter I've ever seen! In fact it's topped only by McKay walking in on Beckett holding a pillow and a hand grenade.
It's not Ancient its...its...WHAT? IT'S WHAT? THAT'S CRUEL AND UNUSUAL!
...and I don't have to wait for the next chapter...it's right there waiting. HA! GO ME!
You better say what the heck this technology is soon...
| Estel Kenobi chapter 1 . 5/1/2006
GAMBIT! YES! He did it with style...
Oh SO AWESOME! You get to me my hero for the day...just for the X-men comments.