Reviews for Bananas and apples
Kisuke630 chapter 1 . 3/12
I don't get it
Eriyum chapter 1 . 7/23/2016
I connected strongly with Harry only because I couldn't understand what was going on. Until the 3rd read through. Then I jumped to the conclusion that Harry cut up Ron and now I connect strongly with Hermione.
SnarkyAndProudHufflepuff chapter 1 . 6/2/2016
Mm interesting, I like how you left it vague, sort of up to the readers view point. I'm guessing here that Ron and the Professors that you mentioned were killed in the final battle, after Harry killed Voldemort with apparently the sword his mind snaps and he goes into a coma, apparently with some memory loss and insanity issues. Which would make sense why he thinks that Ron and the Professors will come back.

Severus gives him a potion to help with his memory? Or at least his new memories or something of the like? Mm with the cutting of the apples and bananas it could be a representation of Harry cutting himself after being free from the coma? The tomatoes with the red juices coming out of them could represent blood, but I don't really know what the bananas would represent?

Or maybe after Voldemort was killed Harry ended up going crazy and killed Ron and the Professors that were mentioned? Again though I don't really know what the bananas represent. Mm, either way this was very interesting and I would love a sequel; although considering the fact that you wrote this a long time ago I seriously doubt you will. Either way great story! I like how you give a little information while still being vague about the whole thing. Great job with it I love stories like this!
I believe in nargles too chapter 1 . 6/26/2015
I think i understand but can you clarify what is happening please.
Ace chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
This is my favorite fanfiction. I can't believe you wrote it in only 10 minutes. I must have read it 15 times in the last 6 years or so. I don't know what it is about it. Maybe it's just the tone. Just, how you are so skilled at making Harry sound... simple? Damaged? And his obsession with red, and how Snape leaves spaces at the table and half smiles at him. It's just great.

Anyways, I realize you posted this nearly 10 years ago, so you may never read this review. I just wanted you to know that I appreciate this.
BeLlIxiEs chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
That was so sad...
loved it though...
Boompow chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
Please write a sequel this has so much potential
Guest chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
he cut up ron...
bodo1971 chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
A lot room for imagination.
snarryself chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
Ok so harry killed Ron and a lot of professor. But im still a little confuse. But i love the feeling the story has. Harry can't tell what is wrong but the actions of those around him say so much.
Aisha Salke chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
Though I can't honestly say that I know what exactly is going on, I can say that I did enjoy reading this. I hope that one day you will revisit this storyline and expand on what you have; I'd love to see more and maybe get a little more back-story as to what happened.

As near as I can tell, and I freely admit this is only my interpretation of it, it seems that after defeating Voldemort the Horcrux that was in Harry did some kind of damage to his mental state. I don't know if the opinion of other reviewers is correct when they say they think Harry killed Ron. I can see him being dead but that could have happened during the battle, the same with the professors who are missing; I can see people keeping watch over Harry for all he sacrificed for them.

The hints you gave for the Harry/Severus interactions could actually be romantic or 'brotherly' so that is another thing it would be nice for you to fully explain so that I can fully understand them. I assume the routine of questions is to see if Harry is recovering who he once was, memories and all.

As far as a deeper understanding of their interactions, as I said I can actually see it from both views. For brotherly I can see Severus keeping his promise/vow by watching over the savior once more. I can also see the reason for Harry staying with Severus being that they were in a relationship and while he can't do anything to/with Harry at the moment he also can't abandon him.

I can also believe that something might have snapped in Harry and he did something to others, mostly because of the image Harry project with his obsession with cutting; though the attraction to the color red could again be taken one of two ways. In one way it can be read as a desire of/for blood, but it could also be an allusion to Ron as he was often associated by his red hair color. So I can see Harry associating red with him and, because he was his friend, finding comfort in that color.

Though a bit too vague for me to gain conclusive answers about, I do believe that this was well-written. As I said before I do hope that one day you'll come back to this and perhaps provide some answers to those questions.
Autumn Alchemist chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
I loved it. It sounded like a River Tam rambling, and I believe I was able to decode it perfectly. I loved the way you wrote this. It made perfect sense. I would certainly be interested in reading a sequel.
sneaky lunitic spy chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
this makes no sense but perfect sense i love it
Blueberre chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
Loved it! Harry seems mental but you're not completely sure...and theres this tangible sadness throughout it all. awesome!
KJoann chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
OMG! This is completely insane, and I love it! Harry's mental! This was so creppy. You're a really good writer. It takes a lot for me to say that a piece of writing is scary/creepy!
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