Reviews for Truth of a Toddler
Ken106348 chapter 27 . 6/19
What happened to the frog did she cook it?
Princess-of-the-Pen chapter 22 . 5/1
You know, for someone who was raised by muggles, spent the first 11 years of his life thinking that he was a muggle, and is dating a muggle born, Harry seems to know nothing of the muggle world and seem to be very anti-muggle. He mind as well be pureblood or a blood purist.
Princess-of-the-Pen chapter 15 . 5/1
I notice you keep spelling sense like "since." Sense is more like a feeling. Common sense, It didn't make sense, I sensed you coming. Since is related to time/reason. It's been so long since I saw you, Since you're here..., I have no free time since I procrastinated on all my work.
Guest chapter 7 . 2/9
"I was just hoping that when Ginny and I got married, everything would be different. That's the whole reason why I purposed to her, I was hoping things would take a turn for the better."
That is a recipe for disaster. Everything will be different, but most likely not better.
Guest chapter 5 . 2/9
Why did Ginny suggest that Harry invites Hermione, when it is at least likely that it would lead to such situations?

Her daughter used to be 4, not 3, and Harry did figure it out, he just believed her when she denied it.
On the other hand, he should be able to figure out that she needed a boyfriend 5 years ago, not necessarily now. He was right that she wouldn't want to be separated for some months for a boyfriend if she had one now.

And what will she do now? Lie to her daughter her whole life? Tell her some years later she could have known her father?
Guest chapter 1 . 2/9
It would be nice to know why she left him. Maybe you explain in later chapters.

As it is, it seems strange that she left without telling him, especially as he most likely wouldn't want his daughter to grow up without him.
FierceDeityLinkMask chapter 20 . 11/13/2015
Hermione is an idiot without an iota of common sense! This might as well be unintentional Hermione bashing! If I were harry Hermione would be getting the door slammed in her face!
hhrforever chapter 27 . 10/17/2015
I would love to see a sequel. The grammar needs a lot of work. A 4 year old child is a preschooler not toddler. The timeline was also all over the place. I would have loved to see how they were when they got together. When. Flashbacks would have been great too. I really loved the plot of this story. I always hated Ginny.
Chameleonxx chapter 27 . 6/10/2015
The Ghostly Minion chapter 3 . 8/13/2014
This has all the makings of a good story. I'll give you the final verdict anon.

D. Page Robin
Dagger-Seishin chapter 27 . 4/6/2014
buy another chacoalte frog and put it int he cage lol problem solved.

loves this story BTW it was funny but cute as well.
MonsePotter chapter 4 . 12/13/2013
Idk why I think Ginny is a b**ch! I hate her!
GhostGlowLight chapter 4 . 10/12/2013
love it
purefaith91 chapter 23 . 1/24/2012
Ginny really is a little off, huh? I was hoping that the creature that wanted to eat Hermione might have gotten her instead. No such luck. Doesn't Hermione remember that Ginny was there or wonder how she ended up there? We know how Harry got there, but not Hermione or Ginny. I suspect something sinister afoot. Hopefully it will not all come down on Harry when he tells them that he has come to his senses. p
purefaith91 chapter 17 . 1/24/2012
Harry has really become a wuss. Plus, did either he or Ron think that Hermione would ever leave voluntarily without taking her daughter? He would deserve for her to make him crawl and grovel before she listened to his crap. p
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