Reviews for My Deliverance
phillynz chapter 1 . 7/27/2019
Dragonfyre1234 chapter 5 . 2/6/2018
Sometimes it's just good to read a story about a relationship...a classic boy meets girl girl meets boy and sparks fly with just a hint of drama...this story really made my day and I don't know if you're still on this site but great job
Solaria Sunstone chapter 5 . 7/11/2015
Great story, different but great.

Solaria Sunstone xxx
Godschildtweety chapter 5 . 11/19/2011
great story
Ebony10 chapter 5 . 1/7/2011
That was an excellent story! Thanks for sharing! :D
Death and Rebirth chapter 5 . 11/11/2010
slightlyxjaded chapter 5 . 9/22/2010
Good read...very cute and very personal. It was obvious when reading this that you put a lot of yourself into it and made everything seem so believable. Your vivid descriptions were awesome-well done. One suggestion though: maybe read through it one more time before you post? I noticed some words strung together and some confusion between words (i.e. whose vs. who's and to vs. too). Maybe I'm just OCD about writing (I have my own share of difficulty with them), but I read on your profile that you appreciate constructive criticism...and that was all I had. All in all, this was a good story...good job! Thanks and I can't wait to read your other works!
AngelONight chapter 5 . 6/6/2009
aw, this story was great! it was so sweet, and i loved the length! and wow, an eventful day for chapter 5.

i loved how you described sere and dare's moments together, it just seemed so sweet. and i loved the start and end of the story in Sere's voice, made it even more sweet. short and sweet, just perfect!

amazing writing! :D
nieshka chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
I enjoyed this story. You're right, definitely feel-good. I noticed very few grammatical/spelling errors. The plot flowed well, although, I did notice inconsistencies like Serena just seemed to have dropped her job and the whole math tutoring thing. Again, very minor details but I felt would merit a mention. Overall, well-written but could do with more details. But then again, you wrote this 3 years ago. :) Thanks for sharing!
Forever Ordinary chapter 2 . 12/1/2007
I totally love it..
Sailor Alpha chapter 5 . 4/10/2007
Adorable screen names for the girls I was dying with laughter!

I loved the story and i would love to see you continuing with your writing talent!
Doom Princess chapter 5 . 3/24/2007
I enjoyed it throughly, I laughed, I wanted to smack Jake, or kill him which ever came first. I enjoyed it all. thanks for sharing!
reflecting chapter 5 . 10/2/2006
lol beautiful and easy-read story :) thank you for making my boring evening fun! this is an add to favs ;)

SweetSerenity21 chapter 5 . 9/2/2006
that was great...and i thought that this was a great read.
fantafaerie chapter 5 . 7/15/2006
cute...i luv this pairing...
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