Reviews for Outbreak
Zorra Reed chapter 8 . 4/17/2011
That was a sweet story! Needs some revising, missing words here and there, but I enjoyed reading it! You've created a history for the characters that's inspiring and I'm very currious to read more about that if you ever write it.
angry penguin chapter 8 . 1/6/2008
Well done.
LadyNiko chapter 1 . 12/28/2005

punctuation and grammar - you need to get thee a beta reader to help you correct these errors.

You're missing words, so your sentences don't make sense. You've got a really good story idea, but please, please, please - get a beta reader!

It will really make your story just ROCK when you fix all these glaring errors.