|Reviews for Tempered Shift|
| unimportant fan chapter 19 . 12/29/2019
Such a good story to end just like that...emotions have been crushed. Loved every second though, so thanks for bringing me this far into your story. I really enjoyed the style in which you wrote this piece and it has fed my own creativity.
| Edibeth chapter 13 . 12/29/2019
Loved Pakkun’s comment about the shampoo lol!
| 50blades chapter 7 . 2/28/2019
I have read many many many fanfics with fight scenes and jutsu. The way you wrote Kakashi using Suriyudan no Jutsu to put out the fire was absolutely brilliant and so badass. Kudos.
| Guest chapter 19 . 2/16/2018
Always an incredible disappointment to read a story and get to the last page and realize it was never finished. Especially when it's so damn hard to find KakaSaku fics that have substance, like this one. But life happens, hope you're doing well. Maybe one day the inspiration will hit you again.
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/22/2017
Kamikaze no jutsu is a suicide jutsu isn’t it ?
| tiffanycr chapter 19 . 5/30/2017
Can it be adopted?
| electrickpanda chapter 19 . 9/11/2013
I am filled with a rage only known to drunken vikings and Liam Neeson that this is where it ended.
My feels are non-shiny.
| Elanwye chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
An abandoned fic? If only it wasn't so, it was SO good while it lasted. (
Sure the plot is completely AU now (5 or 6 years since this particular work was updated, as you probably know that the plot of Naruto had been lengthened and became even more complicated), but it could still work, there is alot of originality in this that I found is sorely lacking in many fictions. From the way the characters interact, the narration, and the battles plus feasible descriptions that didnt seem tottaly fake and off the wall.
-sigh- Its up to my imagination to finish this huh? Too bad my pitiable imagination doesn't flawlessly come up with actual beleivable plot and witty one-liners as you writers seem to be able to do so- flawlessly ofcourse, with hands tied behind your backs while using your nose ;.;
Ahh well, thanks for leaving this up for us to still enjoy!
| JJ chapter 19 . 5/26/2012
I know this I is abandoned but does that mean that orochimaru transferred bodies to Itachi instead of Sasuke? Is orochimaru in Itachi's body? Loved the fic, shame you haven't finished it you really do have a talent xxx
| tik0 chapter 19 . 11/26/2011
Even though this story has been abandoned I still enjoyed every moment of it! Its too bad that we'll never really know the ending of it but thanks for the great read!
| always-kh chapter 19 . 5/2/2010
okay now i am so damn confused and please please update this at a point soo in time.
| always-kh chapter 18 . 5/2/2010
another good chapter. it's getting more and more exciting.
| always-kh chapter 17 . 5/2/2010
another amazing chapter. and gah a time limit nice work of suspense.
| always-kh chapter 16 . 5/2/2010
kabuto well that fits nicely. and i really liked the meeting scenes and wow i was... taken aback by the actions there. but then continued reading and it made sense.
| always-kh chapter 15 . 5/2/2010
another good chapter. hmm the reunion was good in that it is so different than usually people decide to portray such things and i really like that fact.