Reviews for Tempered Shift
tiffanycr chapter 19 . 5/30
Can it be adopted?
electrickpanda chapter 19 . 9/11/2013
I am filled with a rage only known to drunken vikings and Liam Neeson that this is where it ended.
My feels are non-shiny.
Elanwye chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
An abandoned fic? If only it wasn't so, it was SO good while it lasted. (

Sure the plot is completely AU now (5 or 6 years since this particular work was updated, as you probably know that the plot of Naruto had been lengthened and became even more complicated), but it could still work, there is alot of originality in this that I found is sorely lacking in many fictions. From the way the characters interact, the narration, and the battles plus feasible descriptions that didnt seem tottaly fake and off the wall.

-sigh- Its up to my imagination to finish this huh? Too bad my pitiable imagination doesn't flawlessly come up with actual beleivable plot and witty one-liners as you writers seem to be able to do so- flawlessly ofcourse, with hands tied behind your backs while using your nose ;.;

Ahh well, thanks for leaving this up for us to still enjoy!
JJ chapter 19 . 5/26/2012
I know this I is abandoned but does that mean that orochimaru transferred bodies to Itachi instead of Sasuke? Is orochimaru in Itachi's body? Loved the fic, shame you haven't finished it you really do have a talent xxx
tik0 chapter 19 . 11/26/2011
Even though this story has been abandoned I still enjoyed every moment of it! Its too bad that we'll never really know the ending of it but thanks for the great read!
always-kh chapter 19 . 5/2/2010
okay now i am so damn confused and please please update this at a point soo in time.
always-kh chapter 18 . 5/2/2010
another good chapter. it's getting more and more exciting.
always-kh chapter 17 . 5/2/2010
another amazing chapter. and gah a time limit nice work of suspense.
always-kh chapter 16 . 5/2/2010
kabuto well that fits nicely. and i really liked the meeting scenes and wow i was... taken aback by the actions there. but then continued reading and it made sense.
always-kh chapter 15 . 5/2/2010
another good chapter. hmm the reunion was good in that it is so different than usually people decide to portray such things and i really like that fact.
always-kh chapter 14 . 5/2/2010
gotta say i love naruto and his nickname ero-sennin for his sensei. very entertaining dialogue b/w them. nice chapter once again.
always-kh chapter 13 . 5/2/2010
yay. i liked this chapter i was /very/ confused at first but it makes sense now. and makes me relieved.
always-kh chapter 12 . 5/2/2010
it...seems it is real then. this... is so sad.
always-kh chapter 11 . 5/2/2010
omfg if that man fucking killed him i'd wanna rip him a new one. please don't be dead, please don't be dead.
and... as to a reader who said this is boring all i can say is they're a dumbass who's prob'ly mad they haven't already hopped into bed together. you maybe could do more to build tension but i think the fic is already very good.
always-kh chapter 10 . 5/2/2010
i really like your use of all the oc's, normal people... mostly, who all have their own quirks. and o.O suspense i knew it. it's that medic-nin right? ochomararu's helper?
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