Reviews for The Darkness Within
DavidC20OfficialWriter chapter 1 . 12/30/2015
Complicated moment for Kim, the question that i have in mind is why?

Why?

Sometimes the long-distance relationship don't work very well but considering that this is the relationship Kim and Ron, maybe it can work but let's see what's going to happen in Chapter 2!
Guest chapter 6 . 5/21/2015
wiki/Wild_Weasel

COPIED and PASTED from wikipedia

The unofficial motto of the Wild Weasel crews is YGBSM: "You Gotta Be Shittin' Me". This appears prominently on the logo patch of some squadrons. As the story goes, this was the response of Jack Donovan, a former B-52 EWO (Electronic Warfare Officer):
This was the natural response of an educated man, a veteran EWO on B-52s and the like, upon learning that he was to fly back seat to a self-absorbed fighter pilot while acting as flypaper for enemy SAMs.[11][12]
His exact words were: "You want me to fly in the back of a little tiny fighter aircraft with a crazy fighter pilot who thinks he's invincible, home in on a SAM site in North Vietnam, and shoot it before it shoots me, you gotta be shittin' me!"
The "WW" tailcode of the 35th Tactical Fighter Wing and the 37th Tactical Fighter Wing derives from their Wild Weasel heritage.
Sir Thumbzzy chapter 12 . 9/9/2014
Great story...
I'm a bit so so with the ending...
But other than that loved it :3
PhoenixLance chapter 12 . 7/11/2014
"You either die a hero...or you live long enough to see yourself become the villain."

Harvey Dent's words came to my mind again and again while reading this. When it comes down to it, they-for the most part-capture the essence of this tale quite well. Even the best, most pure of us have that bit of darkness inside. When it's brought to the front, when you're forced to confront it, what will you do? Let it consume you? Fight it, overcome it? Or embrace it, acknowledging that it's a part of you?

Kim and Ron had to face all those questions and more in this tale. Personally, I feel as though Bortel wasn't their enemy here, but themselves and the entirety of the human condition, the darkness that resides in their hearts and in others. And you captured this quite well, all the moral quandaries, even when Kim and Ron were deep in Bortel's clutches.

"The death of self" ...man, Will Du's character. He was the true hero of this, even if Kim and Ron "regained" that title with their redemption. Not only that, he was incredibly likable, a first in all the KP fanfics I've read.

This has certainly given me much to ponder. This work is fantastic, and I wish there was a sequel of some sort. But really, what more can be said?

Bravissimo!
dan chapter 12 . 9/29/2013
this is a fantastic story, this could be a movie
Muzzlehatch chapter 7 . 6/23/2013
That was a good one, Zaratan. You never fail to deliver.
Sailor Pandabear chapter 12 . 6/7/2013
nice. pretty dark and makes one think
holydemon00 chapter 10 . 2/20/2013
I see that Kim has started to learn that responsibility isn't about finding an easy solution to a hard decision, but finding the decision hard, which is the reason she's the team's leader, not Ron, nor Wade, even if she might not be as capable as they are; Kim thinks before she acts.
Jake chapter 2 . 2/10/2013
The gray guy is so dead when Kim uses her battle anytime
KPkirstan21 chapter 12 . 1/8/2012
You should keep writing KP fanfiction like this,but shorter.
The Halfa Wannabe chapter 12 . 1/23/2011
The second I heard Miranda I knew it was a reference, and then the mention of pacifists and psychopaths closed the deal.
nekoken chapter 12 . 8/27/2010
Great story everyone I have read stories from most if not all of the people who worked on this and it was all great writing. It also flowed together really well considering it had so many different writers. well great story and keep up the awesome writing
the grey mage chapter 12 . 4/14/2009
i thoroughly enjoyed this story, it may have had its rough spots and odd twists. but hopefully more community efforts will continue to be written.

i do feel that the "T" rating held back some though.
the grey mage chapter 4 . 4/14/2009
ah, that makes sense. but the execution on the last chapter had thrown me for a loop.
the grey mage chapter 3 . 4/14/2009
what the hell? this chapter completely changes the story, from beginning to the end.
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